Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People are never satisfied with what they have; they always want something more or something different. Use specific reasons to support your answer.
Some people say that people can be satisfied with what they have already, while others insist that we always want something more or different. I personally agree with the latter opinion and we always seek for the better. There are three reasons to support my claim, which will be explored in the following paragraphs.
First, people always see what others, such as friends, family, or even strangers on the streets, have and think that they need those products too. There are always trends in fashion, food, colors, and so on. A lot of people would want the new trending products as they get more popular. For instance, when I was in elementary school, I used to wear what my mother bought for me without considering what people around me had. However, as I grew up, I started to understand that friends were wearing clothes that looked like clothes from magazines. Later, I asked my mother to go shopping with me and bought more fashionable clothes. Even though I also liked the clothes I already had, I was not satisfied with them and wanted new trending clothes. In short, people, especially youngsters, want what others have and get into the trends.
Second, as the technology improves so rapidly, there are always new products in the market. Companies always invent new goods that are more comfortable, convenient, and attractive so that they can keep customers. For instance, one of the largest companies, Apple, releases their new versions of phones or laptops with better camera quality, faster movement, or larger screens. The products are not so reasonable for most people, in my opinion. However, they are still so lucrative because there are many people who buy them regardless of the price of the updated products.
Lastly, we are never satisfied with not only the products but also ourselves. Most people want themselves to be better people every day. We study hard at school because they want to absorb knowledge and be intelligent. Most people who work out try to be fitter or healthier. For me, I have been studying English for four years to get better at it and be able to communicate well with people around the world. I believe that people have something they work hard in order to get better at it without satisfying with what they have.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that people are never satisfied with what they have and always want something more. This is because people always see what others have that are fascinating, companies always have the better, updated versions of products and we want ourselves to be better every day.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, lastly, look, second, so, still, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in short, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2133.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 437.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88100686499 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49577768687 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475972540046 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 645.3 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.925162736 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.875 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2083333333 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388051863694 0.236089414692 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122015031398 0.076458572812 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115378354394 0.0737576698707 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258255240943 0.150856017488 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0918073634863 0.0645574589148 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.