Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Life is a short journey. Thus, we must enjoy it as much as we can. World is not an ideal place where we could only do our favorites things and avoid doing tedious tasks. According to me, people should do things that they do not enjoy doing since such activities might be beneficial. I will elaborate my reasons in the ensuing paragraphs.
First, when people do things which they do not like, it gives them different experience which they never gained before. For example, I went to a trip to Cozumel with my husband. In that trip we participated in water adventure activities such as scuba diving, surfing and speed boating. I am very much afraid of water and because of that I do not like to go into water. But I attended all activities with my husband and it gave me a beautiful experience. It took away my fear of water, and now I started enjoying all water activities. It means until and unless we do not try activities which we do not like, we cannot judge that we actually like it or not.
Secondly, sometimes it becomes necessary to do things which people hate to attempt. For example, I earned a degree in Physical Therapy, it is a science which helps patients to get cured by performing exercises. For any diseases, we do not prescribe any kind of medicines. We fully relay on physical exercises for a treatment. Even though I hate to study medicine, I have to get good knowledge on medicines as a part of my physiotherapy program. It helped me to understand the side effects of any medication on patients.
Let’s put in a nutshell, by doing the unenjoyable things, people sometime end up liking it. Human being is a flexible creature and experiencing unenjoyable things lead to adapt their behavior. Eventually, human would feel comfortable when they face these situations again in their life. Thus, I strongly believe that people should do things that they do not enjoy doing.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...s things and avoid doing tedious tasks. According to me, people should do things that they do n...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...judge that we actually like it or not. Secondly, sometimes it becomes necessary...
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...effects of any medication on patients. Let's put in a nutshell, by doing t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1569.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 335.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68358208955 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7257834286 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561194029851 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.2695452689 48.9658058833 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.3181818182 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2272727273 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77272727273 5.45110844103 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332117120263 0.236089414692 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0982213524169 0.076458572812 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126323882252 0.0737576698707 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223716341069 0.150856017488 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0869873718579 0.0645574589148 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 11.7677419355 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.27 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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