Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment, and not enough time on more serious duties and obligations. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is critically important for people to utilize their time on proper things. In fact, it is important to do what is necessary to use most of the time in productive activites. Some people might believe that people today spend too much time on their personal enjoyment and not enough time on serious obligations. However, in my opinion people spend their time on serious duties. I feel this way for the following reasons which I will explain in the following essay.
To begin with, today people are more serious about their work which means they spent most of their time on fulfilling the serious duties.As the world is changing at a rapid pace and competition among people has increased, because of this people are more serious about their careers and jobs. They are more focus and vigilante towards their duties. To exemplify, my own cousins who is a CEO of the company works very hard. He is always busy with his projects, multimedia presentations and proposals works. He is very much focus on his work because he has so many competitors in market and for him to stay in good books he has to fulfill his duties in time. As a result, he hardly spends time on personal enjoyment.
In addition, people today are more caring for other people that give them the feelings of great responsibilty. In todays world, too much violence has made people more sensitive and caring towards humanity. They feel like to help people in need more than before which is a serious responsibilty for a person. My own experience is a compelling example of this. In the pandemic of Covid-19, I volunteered myself with the health organization which provide free testing services for the disease. I accustomed to work twelve hours at the site and after that I personally take follow up with the patient. There are many others people who also volunteered for the same duty and with the help of these people we were able to do more than 1 million testing in people. This would not have been possible if the people are not serious about their duties.
In conclusion, I think people nowadays spend enough time on serious obligations and duties and not on personal enjoyment. This is because, more competition in market allows them to be more serious for their duties. Another reason is, they feel more empathetic about human.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, as to, i feel, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1908.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 400.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54652213813 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 603.9 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0532253455 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7272727273 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1818181818 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.68181818182 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366891005575 0.236089414692 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117197505926 0.076458572812 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0930974446925 0.0737576698707 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256608720146 0.150856017488 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0701586064725 0.0645574589148 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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