The people we work with have many different characteristics and all of them affect the quality of our time at work. Of the following, what do you think is the most important quality for a boss or supervisor to have?
a serious attitude about their work
a lot of related experience
a tendency to always tell the truth
You may choose more than one. Use specific details and examples in your answer.
In my opinion, the most crucial trait for a supervisor to have at work are a serious attitude about their work and a plenty of expertise. I feel this way for the following reasons which I will explore in the subsequent essay.
To begin with, serious attitude about work brings success to the work in less time which means its employee stay happy. People do not leave work place because of plenty of work but because if their supervisor are not great at dealing at work. A supervisor have to show serious attitude so that its employee stay in order and keep the work at good pace. This results in more productivity in less time, also the employee feel relax too. My own experience is a compelling example of this. I worked as pharmacy technician where my manager was a disciplined man and stay focused about his work. He was serious about work and always solved patient problems right away without keep them waiting. For this reason, our pharmacy was liked by every customer and they praised our services were fast and helpful. Also employees felt proud about our manager. This would not have been possible if our Pharmacist did not stay serious about working.
In addition, to keep the quality of work in less time a head of department should also have an expertise related to it work. People often waste a plethora of time when they are not skilled becuase lack of knowledge about their work leads to various errors. If a supervisor is an expert person the working time reduces as they do detailed work in a smart way. To exemplify, my friend work as electric technician in a company with a professional electric engineer. He told me that whenever he had to solve any problem at a working site. He always prefered to go with the engineer as he solved any problem swiftly and smoothly. Also they finished the task usually in few hours. However, when he went alone to fix the problem its took long time to solve the tasks. As a result, a supervisor should be a skilled person.
In conclusion, I prefer two qualities of a manager to have are serious attitude about work and should have work related expertise. This is because, it make work more successful in less time, and because skillful person reduce work load by doing task smartly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1848.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 399.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63157894737 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44746049539 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483709273183 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 584.1 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.4578212368 48.9658058833 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.347826087 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.347826087 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.450449151225 0.236089414692 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137662120221 0.076458572812 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112642619263 0.0737576698707 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.321145258298 0.150856017488 213% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390864116712 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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