Health is the most important thing in our lives, because without health we can not do anything. However, which age of people is more important to do physical exercise? In my opinion, I think younger people need physical exercise. I will tell you two parts, habit and efficiency to support my opinion.
First, the habit is important. If we start exercising at an older age, we will get very tired and easily give up. On the other hand, if we start exercising at a younger age, we can make a habit and it can make your life longer. In addition, the diseases not only come to older people, but also young people can become sick. Therefore, we should prevent disease by exercising earlier.
Second, young people exercise more efficiently. Exercise not only makes people healthy, but also makes people more pretty. It’s better than the expensive face-lifting to become beautiful. Also, if you exercise at a younger age, it means you can earn the money that you get from hospital bills if you were sick.
This is why I think the younger age is more important to do exercise. Of course, it is very hard to start, but if you endure this hard, you can earn 20 years of your life. Don’t regret it later, let’s start now!
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, i think, in addition, of course, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 52.1666666667 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1010.0 1977.66487455 51% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 218.0 407.700716846 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63302752294 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 4.48103885553 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39788504854 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 212.727598566 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54128440367 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 618.680645161 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.5226298549 48.9658058833 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 63.125 100.406767564 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.625 20.6045352989 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4375 5.45110844103 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324476927121 0.236089414692 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11721137002 0.076458572812 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111575094266 0.0737576698707 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20347980898 0.150856017488 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0962008255373 0.0645574589148 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 11.7677419355 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.98 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 86.8835125448 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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