Many people prefer to read novels instead of watching them on movies. In my view, I really do not like to read too much, even though, watching pictures, landscapes and visual effects are more enjoyable for me than reading without those characteristics. However, this opinion could vary depending on a variety of circumstances.
First of all, it is well known that not everything a movie based on a novel could include every single detail during the film. For example, Harry Potter, this novel had a great success because the author could bring us a continuity, during the story with many events which never could be described totally inside the film. In spite of the special or visual effects, readers who could watch the same story in the film, are the best critics to support this.
Additionally, we can state that books which include a novel contain a wide number of pages, and cannot put every page inside the film, what I mean is that producers and directors would spend many hours to describe every detail included in the novel. Moreover, we can mention that films are only the summary of the books. And as a result of that, people who like to read novels and short stories prefer the books instead of the films.
In conclusion, as I mentioned before, I prefer to watch the novels more than read them. Reading novels takes a lot of time, and watching them takes just 2 or 3 hours. But this opinion could vary depending also of what story is and how interesting events are happening over there.
- Illiteracy has traditionally been viewed as largely a third world problem.However it is becoming apparent that in countries such as the USA and Australia, illiteracy is on the increase. 67
- 63)Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most experiences in our lives that seemed difficult at the time become valuable lessons for the future. Use reasons and specific examples to support our answer. 73
- TPO-49 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends 68
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Reading fiction (such as novels and short stories) is more enjoyable than watching movies. Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position. 76
- Illiteracy has traditionally been viewed as largely a third world problem.However it is becoming apparent that in countries such as the USA and Australia, illiteracy is on the increase. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 262, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... without those characteristics. However, this opinion could vary depending on a v...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, moreover, really, so, well, for example, i mean, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, in my view, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1244.0 1977.66487455 63% => OK
No of words: 265.0 407.700716846 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69433962264 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41720426702 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569811320755 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 618.680645161 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0088376738 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.666666667 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.75 5.45110844103 216% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191692652235 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785710251898 0.076458572812 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646242382292 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125886186779 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521010920894 0.0645574589148 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.