It is clearly understood that in such a sophisticated world, societies expect everyone, especially younger people play their rules effectively, so society can move in an improvement direction because the success of every society depends on their people, and in this way younger people play a key role. Some people have inclined toward the opinion that the rules that are required for young people are too strict, whereas others hold exactly the opposite perspective. As far as I am concerned, the rules that society expects young people to follow are strict and they should change them effectively. In the subsequent paragraphs, I will delve into the most outstanding reasons.
The first significant point to be mentioned is that with the development of technology and the internet almost everything gets changed and society should accept this development and move with it. In the modern world young people do not like to live like their parents and they do not obey every rule blindly, they want to understand their role in their society and be involved in it, so the government should make some changes in rules, and make them more flexible for young people. For instance, the government can ask young people opinions about some rules and see the world with their eyes, this way can be very effective to make young people follow the rules that they like it. Take my personal experience as a compelling example; when I was in high school wanted us to obey some strict and old rules, but the rules were unexpected for us, so students comment made a suggestion to schools to change the rules in a good way, at the beginning they did not accept our proposal, but by the passaged time they think about benefits of our proposal and made some changes in rules, the result of that change was unbelievable, students followed the rules and obey them because they thought they made that rules by themselves.
Another reason, which should be taken into consideration, is that societies need their young people more than anything because the future of every country belongs to their younger people, so changes should happen in the rules and they should be more flexible. In addition, when society does not take attention to the world's changes they can not improve, and the situation gets worst. For example, my country manages by some old fashion managers, so they do not like to make a change to their rules, as the result young people in our society do not follow the rules and they want to make some big changes in the whole country, but if the government try to change the rules and made connected with young people, non of this accident needs to happen.
In conclusion, if one weighs the merits and demerits of the aforementioned statement, one soon realizes that every society should make their rules more flexible for younger people, and they should remember the future of every society depend on their future generation.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, whereas, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2422.0 1977.66487455 122% => OK
No of words: 499.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85370741483 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72634191566 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5063018713 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.420841683367 0.524837075471 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 756.9 618.680645161 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 20.1344086022 204% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 119.921820598 48.9658058833 245% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 201.833333333 100.406767564 201% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 41.5833333333 20.6045352989 202% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226276015375 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108603261056 0.076458572812 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678617555292 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156740275145 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617198236256 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.2 11.7677419355 189% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.32 58.1214874552 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 10.1575268817 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.74 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.0537634409 183% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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