Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
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family: Helvetica, sans-serif; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">many people think that the rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. I disagree with this statement.family:"Times New Roman",serif;mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman"">
family: Helvetica, sans-serif;">First, any person is a different, so he/she sould to choose their way by themself. Mny parents want theme children come to work, and continue the family buisness, but maybey the child want to be something else. For example, my father is a gardener, so he want i come to work on his buisness to learn the profesion, moreover he want that i begin to manege his people on the work. but i want to be a lawyer, i do not want to follow him.
family: Helvetica, sans-serif;">Second, in many traditions the people maried in a young age, so many parent force and press on thier children to maried earll. but in reallity this later will be a mistake, because the young people do not feel that thay ready for create a family. moreover the times is changes, although it was accept to maried in young age in the past, today people maried only after the learning. For example, i have a uncle, thirty yaers old, he study 4 yaers at the university, and only after he maried with his girlfriend.
family: Helvetica, sans-serif;">By other hand, i can to understan that the follow and obey its sort of border that diesien the children and make them real and better people.
family: Helvetica, sans-serif;">To conclude, tradition and to exampels from the parent it is a very important. but they can not decied for the young people how to live their life. I my opinion, the community and the parents should to find the balance between give the young people border, an between the freedom that the young people need and want.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, moreover, second, so, for example, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1904.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 331.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.75226586103 4.8611393121 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 5.05760213574 2.67179642975 189% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540785498489 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 110.07211192 48.9658058833 225% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 146.461538462 100.406767564 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4615384615 20.6045352989 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84615384615 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 25.0 5.5376344086 451% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138357163906 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537584413388 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0355926570886 0.0737576698707 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.068768995787 0.150856017488 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410850718179 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 11.7677419355 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 58.1214874552 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.37 10.9000537634 150% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 22.0 10.002688172 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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