Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict.
Use specific reasons and example to support your answer.
In modernized societies issues which related to youth have always been among concerns of human beings' lives. Today, it is axiomatic that many young people spend a large part of their life involving in their community. A plethora of people believe that the rules controlling the youth are too strict, whereas others might hold the exactly opposite view. I firmly agree with statement due to couple of reasons. In what follows, this essay is going aptly delve into the outstanding reasons indicate my point of view.
The first exquisite point is about the terrible effect of preventing these young people. The youth have many new and innovative ideas which lead to improving and broadening the knowledge's barriers. If societies set some serious rules and force the younger people to obey them, they will lose their creativity and make them as a robot which just follows the laws stating by government. In my own experience, I am working in an office which has hired many young employees since last year. The strategy of the boss made them free and let them to do everything that they want. Therefore, the totally performance of the work increased and all of the employees have got some gifts. Indeed, the idea of these youth group leaded to this achievement.
Another noteworthy reason is about their rights. The youth have the rights of living as same as other ages people. Moreover, because of their freshness and energy they will make the society more attractive. For example, assume a society which imposes the youth to obey the rule to not electing for choosing the president. Thus, their community might have dependence and inactive members whom have not many motivations for living in this kind of society any more.
To put it briefly, imposing too strict laws to the younger people not only is not acceptable, but also must be criticized by all member of society. It is advisable to set some rules according to the proven psychological and statistical studies which help the community to be the best.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, whereas, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1675.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 341.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91202346041 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52310553156 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577712609971 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.4937047047 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1578947368 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9473684211 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78947368421 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171330780822 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0467292176394 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425985637535 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0996841323209 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039701933926 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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