Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only do what they know how to do well.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
it goes without saying that in this advanced and progressive world, in which technological advancements affect every corner of daily human beings, concern about youngsters and their future is growing fast. while some people hold the opinion that we should direct young people into a preplanned future through strict rules and demands, others believe that youngsters should have the freedom to do things as their motives ask them. As far as I am concerned, I am of the opinion of the latter group, believe that the rules society wants to young people apply in their lives are unnecessary. I feel this way for two reasons, which I explore in the following essay.
First, restricting rules may escalate the conflicts and end up as overreaction. To put it in other words, young people can
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intolerance when society asks them too much and limits their freedom; as it happened, young people may demonstrate their sadness by doing radical behavior. An example can drive this notion to home. my father always wanted me to study medician while I was interested in engineering. it was bothering me too much, so I decided not to continue my study and started looking for jobs.
Secondly, being creative and having the opportunity to
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it, in this world we live, play an essential role in youngsters development. To be more specific, expecting obedience from young people would kill their sense of creativity. however, they will not be able to use it and
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it so that the outcomes would be a disaster. To put it in a more vivid picture, imagine a child who is innovative in painting with watercolor. however, his teacher wants him to paint in the traditional way. it will, eventually, cause the child do not reach his potential place in painting and be a regular painter.
In conclusion, taking the aforementioned reasons and examples into account, I believe that societies would harm the youngsters by expecting them to follow their rules and it negatively affects them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, while, i feel, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1669.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 334.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99700598802 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74946984416 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574850299401 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8868485759 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.3125 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0625 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108068627083 0.236089414692 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0316927354531 0.076458572812 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0329103356016 0.0737576698707 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0460710376625 0.150856017488 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02489787367 0.0645574589148 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.