Do you agree or disagree with following statement? Successful people try new things and risks rather than only doing what they already know how to do well

practicing new things and doing some risky action has been had less attention among people
A and B had less attention among people

some negative consequences which is much talked about
some negative consequences which are often talked about

Although he lost at their experiments
Although he failed at the experiments

If he felt depress
If he felt depressed

The another equally reasons why
Another equal reason why

the noteworthy refreshingly intelligible research,
the noteworthy and refreshingly intelligible research,

Definitions of noteworthy
adjective
interesting, significant, or unusual.
"it is noteworthy that no one at the bank has accepted responsibility for the failure"
synonyms: notable, interesting, significant, important, remarkable, impressive, striking, outstanding, memorable, unique, special, newsworthy, unusual, extraordinary, singular, rare, unprecedented, groundbreaking, bloggable

in order to reaching more succeeds
in order to reach more success

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