Teachers play a critical role in society since they nurture the students who are supposed to attend and make the future. Their influence on the students’ views is extremely remarkable although these effects are not direct and instantaneous one may not be aware of this huge effect. This sensitive and delicate role necessitates teachers to act and behave very carefully and convey the new materials in a fair and unbiased manner. They do not inspire their own social and political views to students and let the students to construct their own believes in their own perceptions.
since students in their early ages do not have strong views about their around world and relating matters such as social and political issues, conveyance the views of one individual person and making a basic point of view for them is not an authentic act. For example, in primary school, I had a teacher who is a nice person, although her social views could be understood easily in her speaks. She mentioned her beliefs as constant facts and did not provide any opportunity for discussion. We thought that beliefs as unquestionably reality. However, as I grow older, my ideas that had been made by that teacher changed gradually. This changes were thorough a lot of reading and getting information from different sources, although it was better my ideas were built via my own realizations during my growth.
Different persons have varied views since each person grows up in distinct circumstances and cultures. Some of these views may not be in the right way of development of humankind contrariwise they may be mainly detrimental for the promotion of the society. If some teachers with these detrimental ideas convey their beliefs to the students even unconsciously, these notions spread among the society in the future and would have bad effects in the long term if believed by the majority of people. If one person whom is taught by one of those teachers and with those poisonous beliefs occupies a political vacant and gets power, the outcomes can not be imagined how much be mortal. For example, suppose a president with these beliefs may start a war and leads the deaths of many people.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Dancing plays an important role in a culture Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 3
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers should not make their social or political views known to students in the classroom.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Since
... believes in their own perceptions. since students in their early ages do not hav...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, then, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1818.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 367.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95367847411 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71689317276 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539509536785 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2941522746 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.2 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4666666667 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 5.45110844103 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189260975272 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0611260704311 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619502945216 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138158639243 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427883590103 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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