Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Students spend a lot of time in school with their teachers, even more than they spend with their parents. Because they are in a very critical stage of their life, and their personality is going to shape during this period, teachers can significantly affect students’ future. They see their teacher as a role model and learn a lot from them. Because teachers play this vital role in children’s lives, society always respects them and values their efforts. Although some people may believe teachers were more respected in the past, I think they are more praised today than before. I believe in that for two reasons which I will explore in the following paragraphs.
First, as time goes, the value of science increased. People learn to cherish science and people who teach it to others. They say today that knowledge is power, and teachers are powerful because of this knowledge. In the past, most people would not enter university. They attended work after they gained a little knowledge. They left the school and didn’t need their teacher’s help anymore. But today, things have changed. Most people want to enter universities to become experts. For example, if you want to enter college, you need a recommendation letter from your teacher. You have to respect them and be a good student to receive a recommendation letter. It is obvious that teachers have more power than before, so they are more respected than in the past.
Furthermore, they are doing a more challenging job than before, so they deserve more respect. These days teachers teach not only science, but also social and life skills, plus they help students have good morals. They prepare students for the future. Years ago, it was not crucial for teachers whether students could live life or not. They just taught their field and left the class; if the students weren’t good enough, they would punish them. But today, teachers care about students’ feelings, abilities, and talents. I remember a kid from high school who was always alone. He could not communicate with others. My teacher created a fun team game to help him. She made him join a group to play and taught him how to socialize with others. She greatly impacted his future and saved him from loneliness.
In conclusion, teachers are more appreciated today than before because they perform a more complex tasks, and society values science more than ever.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, so, for example, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1991.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 403.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94044665012 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4775752321 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51364764268 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7469670742 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.6551724138 100.406767564 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8965517241 20.6045352989 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72413793103 5.45110844103 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274903751929 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716272630363 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676162331977 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195582187381 0.150856017488 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474094657169 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.78 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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