Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television has destroyed communication among friend and family.
The 20th and 21th centuries are characterized by all the momentous changes which have been made in human's lives. Perhaps the most important milestone of these two centuries is the advent of modern technology. Majorities of people might argue that such a change has caused some unfavorable consequences in human's lives. Bearing this fact in mind a question that is a matter of debate a controversial one is whether TV has deleterious effects on the social relation among people or not. Agreement is yet to be reached; however, to the extent that my personal perspective is concerned, although it has many advantages, television causes irreparable mental and physical health problems in the long run. In the following paragraph, I will pinpoint the most outstanding reasons.
One compelling reason, lending credence to the stance taken above is that in today's hectic world, all family around the globe spend less time together in order to get informed of many things that happen to them. Scientifically speaking, nowadays, people face many trials and tribulations in their everyday life and in order to overcome those difficulties they need to make a relation with others. Actually, some people may think that TV can patronize them with many documentaries shown in different channels. In fact, television is not only sheer waste of time but also may influence people negatively especially youngsters due to the bad literature and antisocial behavior. Arguably, child's brain is like a blank slate which anything can be written on it. In this case, they may imitate those improper behavior which can be harmful for society or among friends and family. Delving further into the issue reveal that we all know that our children at an early age should learn many things such as interacting with crowds of people and some relationship skills and so forth. Indeed. TV can adversely affects children and cause negative mental behavior in long run. A noteworthy refreshingly intelligible statistic revealed by recent social research conducted in our country show that myriads of people who watch television most of the time not only do not participate in family reunion but also do not provide with good relationship skills.
Another reason that is equally important if not more is that advertise on the screen will definitely be harmful toward people's health. Broadly speaking, many companies used to advertise their products in television in an inappropriate way. For example, celebrities present on the show with smoke or alcohol and many of them do not make a secret of their immoral behaviors. In this case, people will feel that such behaviors are acceptable. To put it in other word, watching TV can run people into a huge problem and overwhelmed them by many drawbacks. However, what I alluded to above cannot be overgeneralized to all contexts. Alongside with the innumerable benefits it has, indisputably, people can fill their leisure time with watching TV and gain various information about different subjects such as history and so forth. In addition, they can enhance their social interaction by watching TV shows. Nevertheless, it does not make those preceding benefits pale.
To wrap it up, TV is one of the most significant technological advancement which brings lots of merits and demerits. Contemplating all the aforementioned reason one soon realize that TV can cause many serious problems such as physical and mental problems or antisocial behaviors indirectly. Additionally, watching TV will be threat for people's health due to the fact many famous people advertise in TV improperly. I highly suggest that people should spend time with their family and take part in different reunion
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'broadly speaking', 'for example', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.250384024578 0.229887763892 109% => OK
Verbs: 0.144393241167 0.158761421928 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.110599078341 0.0866891130778 128% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0675883256528 0.046263068375 146% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0399385560676 0.0685040099705 58% => OK
Prepositions: 0.124423963134 0.118717715034 105% => OK
Participles: 0.0414746543779 0.0351676179071 118% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.90059940678 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0215053763441 0.0309702414327 69% => OK
Particles: 0.00153609831029 0.00188951952338 81% => OK
Determiners: 0.0691244239631 0.0887237588012 78% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0291858678955 0.0209618222197 139% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0138248847926 0.0139019557991 99% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3704.0 2387.08602151 155% => OK
No of words: 598.0 408.028673835 147% => OK
Chars per words: 6.19397993311 5.86048508987 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.94510247834 4.48200974243 110% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.394648829431 0.338922669872 116% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.285953177258 0.251872472559 114% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.214046822742 0.174417080927 123% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.150501672241 0.112833075102 133% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90059940678 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 308.0 212.727598566 145% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515050167224 0.524397521467 98% => OK
Word variations: 64.7546860243 59.2087087015 109% => OK
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6684587814 140% => OK
Sentence length: 20.6206896552 20.5533526081 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6158173384 48.84282405 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.724137931 120.699889404 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6206896552 20.5533526081 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.448275862069 0.644075263715 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 49.2160073809 45.7405998639 108% => OK
Elegance: 1.65243902439 1.45489161554 114% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179575292565 0.300154397459 60% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0646027100048 0.103427244359 62% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.042708203311 0.0752933317313 57% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.392264474213 0.497263757937 79% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.12388351735 0.151897553556 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596872111925 0.114077575197 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045639974622 0.0781384742642 58% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.453324599971 0.336927656856 135% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0412529470801 0.067059652881 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136541563799 0.210909579961 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0223642442951 0.0618886996521 36% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.86379928315 259% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.91756272401 163% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 10.0 2.4623655914 406% => Less negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.75985663082 217% => OK
Total topic words: 26.0 13.6433691756 191% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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