Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There is no doubt that in some years from now the world will develop more changes, including here the use of the automobiles. I think that in the future the use of cares will decrease drastically. I feel this way for two main reasons that I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, even though the cars plays a significant role in our everyday's life, in the future we will be using them as less as possible. Due to increase prices of the gas, we will be forced to reduce traveling with cars, instead people will take public transportations like busses and trains, that will be less costly. I believe this, because public transportations always have been less expensive. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. Until last year I did not have my own car, and I was using the train to go to work. Trust me that I did spend way less money then I do now, by using my car. I am planning to stop driving and go back in old times, use the train, because I see that nearly half of my salary is gone for gas and also to maintain the car.
Furthermore, recently, the remote jobs have been so trendy. Companies are offering telecommute positions, and most people like this. Of course working from home is more convenient for everyone, especially for mothers with small kids. It is a perfect solution for them. They can work and take care their kids in the same time. Therefore, they do not have to use their vehicles. My best friend's experience explains this in the best way. She has two little boys, they are twins, and they are just four years old. She had trouble finding someone to watch them, so she could go to work. Thus she decided to find a work from home. She got hired at Amazon as customer service. She is so happy with her job, and more happy because she does not have to pay for someone to watch her babies. So, as we can see, the world is changing, and the use of cars has became less necessary already. As the remote jobs increasing, the use of cars will decrease.
Taking everything into consideration, I would say that besides the important role the cars play in our lives, they are so costly, and people will start to use them less and less every day.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 129, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...he future we will be using them as less as possible. Due to increase prices of the...
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Line 2, column 584, Rule ID: LESS_MORE_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
...rust me that I did spend way less money then I do now, by using my car. I am plannin...
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Line 3, column 583, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...o watch them, so she could go to work. Thus she decided to find a work from home. S...
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Line 3, column 848, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...ld is changing, and the use of cars has became less necessary already. As the remote j...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, if, so, then, therefore, thus, i feel, i think, no doubt, of course, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1783.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 407.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38083538084 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39801929346 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53316953317 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.5103649707 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.32 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.28 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218388167282 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629692719967 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060623613413 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145261004335 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582991187981 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 11.7677419355 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.83 10.9000537634 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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