There is no shortage of opinion on the numbers of cars that will be used after twenty years. In my opinion , I strongly believes that the numbers of cars will abate as compared to the contemporary world of today. To me this prompt seems no brainer .I am consonant with the prompt presented above. I feel this way for two main reasons ,which i will explore in the following paragraphs.
First of all, shortage of the fuels in the today world can be considered as the prime factor that hinders the increment in the number of cars in nearby future .Indeed, because of excessive amount of the fuel consumption there is dearth of the fuel because of which it is causing excruciating problems for the people .If there is not cornucopia of fuel the cars cannot come out to the action. As a result of this scarcity of the fuel, many peoples of my locality sold their cars. About three to four years ago there is glut of cars in my locality the number of cars abated because of this dearth of fuel as well as the soaring of fuel price .If the graph tends to continue like this it is blatant that the numbers of cars decline in an alarming rate .
Secondly, because of various types of air pollution that is engender by cars as well as other vehicles many countries are considering to ban such types of vehicles .As a result , various car manufacturing companies will terminate or lessen the manufacture process of cars.For instance , in many developed countries such as USA,UK are planning to abate the use of such types of vehicles .Moreover, many countries such as korea, japan had already banned such types of cars .Countries are considering to undermine the use of such vehicles and underscore other alternatives sources of transportation with an aim to abate the intensity of the pollution.
Lastly, because of the advancement in the field of science and innovation other form of advanced vehicles may be developed that overweight the advantages of the cars that we use in our contemporary world of today. For instance ,if the vehicles of low cost that can be affordable and that can be accesed by all the people is developed for sure people will be lured towards such types of innovations. As a result, the number of cars will be abated .
In a nutshell, I am highly consonant with the prompt that asserts that the number of cars will declined in the 20 years as compared to the contemporary world of today by providing the examples mentioned above in the paragraph.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, lastly, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, i feel, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 79.0 52.1666666667 151% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2033.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 436.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6628440367 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6690257509 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.440366972477 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 647.1 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.1344086022 179% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 164.295972765 48.9658058833 336% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 169.416666667 100.406767564 169% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.3333333333 20.6045352989 176% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0833333333 5.45110844103 222% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.5376344086 524% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222254170677 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104487634575 0.076458572812 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619389329469 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14207828218 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538888696976 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 11.7677419355 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.4 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.1575268817 159% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.34 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.0537634409 163% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.