Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is an undeniable fact that we live in an ever-shifting world. Correctly anticipating of next step of this transition could influence financial decisions, which eventually led to less pecuniary damage or more lucrative long-term investments. The car industry is one critical area as a worse prediction rose to a vociferous topic. While some people assume that car usage will decrease in the coming decades, others like me, disagree with such an idea. I will explain my reasons in the following paragraphs.
The higher the drastic population grows, the greater the demand for every comfort creature. To clarify, the increasing population will have resulted in developing more suburbs and more commuters. Consequently, most people will work in a place far from their home. In such a situation, public transitions can no longer be a priority, especially when they have to change the lanes due to long distances and consume a lot of time.
Commuters not only change in number but in lifestyle as well. It's undeniable that youth tend to live independently and, less distracted by their family. While many current people live with their family and use one car for all of them but People's lifestyles obviously become lavish, indolence, and luxurious, In coming years everyone living by herself and, willing to possess her/his own home, own furniture and, of course, his/her own car. Consequently, we can expect more single-occupant vehicles. It is also crucial that Such cultural change is not far from the sight of those who benefited from the car industry. The car industry will use this condition by all that power to maintain its customer. These explanations show how population growth will eventually have led to greater demand for cars.
Last but not least, although pollution is worrisome for some people who care about environmental issues and, unwilling to cars utilization, in future decades by widespread electric cars, a satisfying solution to the pollution, will join car using fans.
In conclusion, car use in the future decades will drastically increase; I feel this way because of population growth, expanding people who live in the suburbs, becoming independent with detached livestock demand, lavish, and more consumer lifestyle beside the car industry efforts to keep its industry are efficient will boosting the number of cars. Additionally, emerging electric cars will inspire those who are currently unwilling to use a car because of pollution.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 322, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'boost'
Suggestion: boost
...to keep its industry are efficient will boosting the number of cars. Additionally, emerg...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, so, well, while, i feel, in conclusion, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2073.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 395.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24810126582 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89670040865 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569620253165 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 658.8 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.7362245224 48.9658058833 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.105263158 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7894736842 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.10526315789 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180411576005 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544948048543 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552236160171 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104878741789 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038549508404 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.