Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Universities should
give the same amount of money to their students’ sports activities as they give
to their university libraries. Use specific reasons and examples to support
your opinion.
I disagree with the statement. On the contrary, I think that the university should give more money to its university libraries instead of students’ sports activities. The reasons are as follows.
First, the university should care about students’ convenience. Therefore, if the university gives more money to university libraries, students can feel more convenient. To elaborate, if the university spends more money building new libraries, this means that students can have access to more books and articles. In addition, if the university decides to put new printers and computers in the library, students can use these hardware resources in the library to find books or copy pages. As a result, students will feel extremely convenient when they are looking for information and books in the library. However, if the university spend money on students’ sport events, it might make students spend a lot of time and effort helping it prepare sport events, and most students find these tasks extremely inconvenient.
Secondly, universities should care about their reputation, and spending more money on libraries can help them get a better image. For instance, if the university spend money decorating the library, then students can enjoy reading books and articles in a relatively comfortable environment. Moreover, people who visit the library will generally think that this university places an emphasis on its students’ studying. As a result, the university can gain a better reputation. However, if the university decides to spend this money on sport activities, most people will think that it is not paying attention to its students’ academic performances. Consequently, the university might gain a bad image.
Finally. Universities should care about their money, and giving more money to libraries can help them save lots of money. To elaborate, if the university want to hold a football festival, it might need to spend more than $1,000,000 dollars renting spaces, buying equipment, and preparing drinks and food. Moreover, hiring coaches to train the students alone might cost more than $500,000 dollars. Accordingly, the university needs to spend a great deal of money on sport activities. On the contrary, if the university wants to expand the library by buy new shelves, then these shelves generally cost $50,000 dollars only. What’s more, it might only need to spend $80,000 repairing old walls and roofs. Hence, it is clear that spending money on libraries can help the university save lots of money.
In conclusion, I maintain that the university should give more money to libraries instead of sport activities, because the university care about students’ convenience, reputation, as well as money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, consequently, finally, first, hence, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 9.8082437276 234% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2301.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 427.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3887587822 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.908964901 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.430913348946 0.524837075471 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 706.5 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 12.0 3.51792114695 341% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9909365904 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.043478261 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5652173913 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.34782608696 5.45110844103 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322471363057 0.236089414692 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126028254746 0.076458572812 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0809793066222 0.0737576698707 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255617864972 0.150856017488 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0741053908683 0.0645574589148 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 10.9000537634 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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