Nowadays, many university students are worried about tuition. It is because the tuition is so expensive, especially in South Korea. Therefore, unfortunate things are happening that some students could not attend college due to tuition. Thus, I think university education should be provided free of charge to all interested scholars. I will tell you three parts, justice, investment and hope.
First point is justice. I think it is the most important of the three reasons. Most university students do not have much money, so they should borrow from parents or take out a loan from a bank. Therefore, it does not matter for rich people, but if you do not have enough money to pay tuition, you will start from debt. It can bridge the gap between rich and poor. So, no matter how good you are for studying, or you want to study, you can not go if you have no money. It is a big problem in our society.
Second, letting students study for free in university is an investment. Now is the age of low birth rate and aging. Therefore, each nation needs a lot of young great talent. If universities provide students with free study, the students will help the country more and have more intellectuals in the country, so it can operate the country efficiently. In fact, Germany provided free education to university students, so they became the most powerful economically in the world.
Last, the free university can be a hope to students. For example, these days, in South Korea, many students are so busy studying and earning money. Thus, some students are frustrated with reality and think I am useless in the world. This led Korea become the highest suicide rate in the world. If the tuition system is changed for free, students will be able to study comfortably, get less stress and freely dream. I think this is the ideal country.
University tuition is still at the center of the issue. If the government still considers it a waste of money, I think they just think about the present. We should look to the far future. There is a saying, “Look at the forest, not the trees.” Looking at the forest like this, we can accomplish many miracles.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, second, so, still, therefore, thus, for example, i think, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.0286738351 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1779.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 376.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73138297872 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55749720053 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518617021277 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.5270443056 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.8888888889 100.406767564 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9259259259 20.6045352989 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22222222222 5.45110844103 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206105978398 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535812114166 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0776970992416 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116145104255 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.051473272456 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 11.7677419355 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 58.1214874552 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.56 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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