Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? When people solve problems as a group, they come up with better solutions that if they were to try to solve the problem individually. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Looking at a problem is different from each and every individual.If a person has one idea,other has some other. In fact , solutions that come if solved by a group are more when compared to a individual trying to solve a problem.So,I agree with the opinion that "When people solve problems as a group, they come up with better solutions that if they were to try to solve the problem individually".The reasons are as below.
Firstly,while in a group ,as many are present each have their own perspective at looking at a problem.As the mindset of individual varies from others,we get different solutions.Time to solve a problem decreases.For instance, if we take a software company,there are teams for every project.Every member in the team might have expertise in one or more areas and if all of them work towards the same goal ,they come up with different solutions.In my personal experience,my team was given a task to do.As my team members were on leave the same day,I have worked towards it the whole day but I couldn't get a good solution.Next day,while my fellow teammates are present ,with the help of them I got a pretty good solution within no time.
Also,if we consider the ideas generated as a group towards a problem,they are more compared to a single person's ideas.For example,In many sports like football,cricket teamwork is very important.With the team ideas,they can plan for the success of the team according to their personal strengths.If one can think of batting techniques ,other can think of bowling ways for that particular opponent.
As well, we take good decisions if we consult other's opinions.Sometimes, we feel what we do is correct.But for others,it may seem to be inappropriate.Doing things that many like would be appreciated and praised always.For example,if we want to buy a television in our home,the needs and requirements of individual in the home vary.It is then if we involve everyone in the home to share their opinion and interests ,a television will be loved by all after it's purchase.
So,I think that solutions are better and more if we try to solve them in a group rather than a individual trying to get a solution.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, may, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1810.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 366.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94535519126 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29081771744 2.67179642975 123% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532786885246 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 12.0 3.51792114695 341% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.6003584229 29% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 61.0 20.1344086022 303% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 210.897816226 48.9658058833 431% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 301.666666667 100.406767564 300% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 61.0 20.6045352989 296% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.0 5.45110844103 330% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 45.0 5.5376344086 813% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286786333315 0.236089414692 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169304284592 0.076458572812 221% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.184636975023 0.0737576698707 250% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182241034482 0.150856017488 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.169230068058 0.0645574589148 262% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.4 11.7677419355 275% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 9.56 58.1214874552 16% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.10430107527 239% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.1 10.1575268817 267% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.32 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.2 8.01818996416 127% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 10.002688172 185% => OK
gunning_fog: 26.4 10.0537634409 263% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 27.0 10.247311828 263% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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