Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
it is obvious that helping the community is very valuable in every society. Although some people might adhere to the idea that young people do not allocate enough time to help their communities, others possess the conviction that they do. As far as I am concerned, I believe nowadays the youth do not consider enough time to be helpful to their society. I will develop my reasons in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, one should take into account that young people have a hectic lifestyle today, and they should work very hard to handle their daily tasks. it is generally known that young people are involved in studying, part-time jobs, social media, etc. In other words, there is a myriad of things they should do in their lives. As a result, they will face a shortage of time in their schedules, and cannot give an appropriate amount of time to help their communities. Since doing things like voluntary works are time-consuming. Therefore, young people are not funding for helping society very much.
Another noteworthy reason that should be mentioned is that many processes and services are done by the government and NGOs these days, or other social systems. it may have been necessary for the past that young people had to take social responsibilities, but now it is a different story. For instance, in the past young people took classes to teach orphans and today the government takes care of this issue. On the other hand, social situations are more complicated in comparison to the past, and young people cannot spend time to find out all the instructions and rules, so they would not give enough help to others.
To wrap it up, I am of the view that young people do not distribute the proper amount of time to give hand to their communities because they are dealing with a hectic life, and many tasks are done by organizations and governments these days. having these facts in mind, I recommend not only do the youth should spend more time to do social works, but also communities should ask them to help.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, therefore, for instance, as a result, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1685.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 353.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77337110482 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57289929225 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515580736544 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7777703267 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.3125 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0625 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349000635699 0.236089414692 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123282061128 0.076458572812 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743957893958 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237616328621 0.150856017488 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0859952438993 0.0645574589148 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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