In the current world existence, youngsters are the most active members of a community. As I am the witness of current scenario, most of the youth do their best to lead their society in the best way, and have lots of achievements for their community. Some people imply that new generation ere not considered to their community, while others believe that they are trying to have the best goals to improve their country. Ego, when it comes to my stance, by weighing the pros and cons, I firmly hold that youth are helping their communities by acclaimed way. In what follows, I will cogently pinpoint my most conspicuous reasons to justify my point of view.
The first exquisite to be mentioned is that most of the youngster are inclined that augment their information about their major. This will help them to solve the most professional problems in their community. I am of the opinion that putting time to make ourselves means making the best for our society. For instance, I am a food technologist. I tend to study all the points about the food safety because it is the most problematic issue in my society. Therefore, I will be a professional of food safety, so my community no longer suffer from food born illnesses.
Another equally significant point to be mentioned is that nowadays-new generation have the sense of having a development country. As I observe in my environment and people around me, most of them are enthusiastic to eliminate the problems and make their country as well. For example, If you ask from most of the success and hard workers persons in my society what is your main goal, they would answer you that I would make the most prospective live for my people, and that is what really give me the energy of trying more.
In brief, contemplating all of the aforementioned reasons, I believe that new generation are accepting the arduous situation to make their country. I think that in every community, youngsters are aim to have the most success country and it is everyone dream, especially in my own country.
- TOEFL T P O 32 - Integrated Writing Task 3
- TPO-33 - Integrated Writing Task 73
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours. Use specific reasons and examples to suppo 60
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Parents today are more involved in their children s education than were parents in the past Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 70
- TPO 27 integrated writing Little ice age 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 25, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...f trying more. In brief, contemplating all of the aforementioned reasons, I believe that ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, really, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in brief
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1684.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 354.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75706214689 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77755305676 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485875706215 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 526.5 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6301366971 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.25 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.125 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0625 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113286776962 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0369543613045 0.076458572812 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.032518161306 0.0737576698707 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.067245692103 0.150856017488 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355791766614 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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