Young people are the heart of nation. They are the reason for development and success of their nation and they are always looked up to as they hold the future in their hands. Personally, I disagree with the given statement. Young people are enthusiastic to help their communities. I feel this for several reasons and I will explain that in this essay.
Firstly, the companies today have a lot of initiatives about helping the community. Every company has a dedicated unit called 'Corporate Social Responsibility', through which various social activities take place. The young people working in these multi-national companies and the start-ups participate in the company initiatives. They spend their time to solve community problems and offer help at their level. For example, in the recent news that I read, was a perfect example of how a young person contributed to the education of a village school students. He used to visit the village on weekends and took whole responsibility of teaching the school students using modern digital equipments to better understand the concepts.
Moreover, young people follow footprints of their older generation. There are many social workers, activists who have dedicated their lives for betterment of community. The young generation is supporting the initiatives in various ways. To illustrate, they help their communities by participating in various cleanliness drives, tree-plantation drives, donation drives, etc. Recently, there was a blood-donation camp arranged by my school alumni. A lot of alumni supported the initiative actively and this was a huge success.
In particular, in the recent times, the rate of adoption has also increased. This shows that the young people are aware of the population growth issue and are considering taking responsibility of abandoned children to help society.
In this way, in my opinion, the awareness to spend time to help the community is even more increasing in the modern world. We can observe this very well if we consider the growth of villages along with the cities and can say that the contribution of the young people for their communities is promising.
- In 1938 an archaeologist in Iraq acquired a set of clay jars that had been excavated two years earlier by villagers constructing a railroad line The vessels were about 2 200 years old Each clay jar contained a copper cylinder surrounding an iron rod The a 3
- In 1938 an archaeologist in Iraq acquired a set of clay jars that had been excavated two years earlier by villagers constructing a railroad line The vessels were about 2 200 years old Each clay jar contained a copper cylinder surrounding an iron rod The a 3
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 70
- In 1938 an archaeologist in Iraq acquired a set of clay jars that had been excavated two years earlier by villagers constructing a railroad line The vessels were about 2 200 years old Each clay jar contained a copper cylinder surrounding an iron rod The a 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 290, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... the young people for their communities is promising.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, so, thus, well, for example, i feel, in particular, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1812.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 343.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28279883382 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01109305731 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536443148688 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.4713722622 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2857142857 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244019108788 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762472600161 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576955658006 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133110536281 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403294740411 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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