Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A zoo has no useful purpose. Use specific reasons and examples to explain.
A zoo is a kind of place where it would be built in big landscapes for different purposes.An It needs many different things such as area, some kind of these animals, several visitors.These sometimes unnecessary and sometimes not.
First of all, animals need protection which is protected by human, and they have to be feeding by people, because they usually need good condition where they live.There are several predators which hunting them for this reason, people have to look them carefully.
Also, nowadays there are many endangered animal in our world such as tiger, polar bear etc.If our communities take care them off they would be extinct in near future.So, humans must to improve their concentration to their living conditions and environments.
In addition, children wonder animals and they always would like to have animals such like cat, dog because these animals give good sense to their owners.Some of these children take and feed them alone but some others not, some of these youngs parents like animals but other parents might hate.All animals decrease their owners negative situation down.
Furthermore, there would be several other places near the zoo such as restaurant, cafe etc.And, in that places there are different kind of workers who earn money and salary.I mean, the most of the zoos improve their environments social interactions, and it increases next places trades.
In contrast, a few number of people think it causes consuming time and money, and these people think that there could be any other type of places for people's socializations.For example, city park, it gives good feeling to people too, it cause wasting money less than zoo because there are not animal which must be feeding by human.
In conclusion, although there are few disadvantages, there are several good reasons, taking account of all good reasons zoo is good places where people go.So, I agree that statement definitely and clearly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, look, so, for example, i mean, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, kind of, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1637.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 315.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19682539683 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65318967846 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542857142857 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6003584229 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 20.1344086022 223% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.8345812568 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 233.857142857 100.406767564 233% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 45.0 20.6045352989 218% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.5714285714 5.45110844103 359% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 5.5376344086 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0436242384587 0.236089414692 18% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.026895943809 0.076458572812 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0312334023744 0.0737576698707 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.026895943809 0.150856017488 18% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312334023744 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.6 11.7677419355 218% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 25.8 58.1214874552 44% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.8 10.1575268817 205% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.77 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.01818996416 118% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 10.002688172 195% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.0 10.0537634409 199% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.247311828 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.