Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
A good sense of humor is one of the most important human qualities.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
I believe that the essence of life is to be happy. I agree with the idea that one of the most important qualities of human is a good sense of humor because the quality makes you happy in every situation.
First of all, it is crucial to one’s career to because a person who has a good sense of humor can deal with co-workers in an easy way and keep a good relationship with them. For instance, Saruul, one of my coworkers, always talk jokes and can cheer up every person in my office. All employees communicate and work with him politely because they like him. Last year, he was rewarded as the employee of the year. Therefore, being a good sense of humor is one of the vital characters of people.
Furthermore, everyone wants to live happily, and most of us solve this by having fun with their friends. If you have a friend who is a good sense of humor, I consider that you are a lucky person. As we know, there were many rich people who suffered from aloneness. It tells us people need people, not money and other economically valuable things such as big houses and cars. For instance, I work at a bank as a Chief Information Officer and earn enough money. However, sometimes, I feel stress. In this case, I have fun with my friends. Last week, I went to a Japanese restaurant after my work with close friends, Saruul and Anand. We ate sushi, tempura, and soba and talking about fun things. I had a great time and energized.
In summary, I strongly agree that a good sense of humor is one of the most vital human qualities because it is a key factor of happiness in our life. We have to try to learn not only professional knowledge but also a good sense of humor.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 125, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an easy way" with adverb for "easy"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...sense of humor can deal with co-workers in an easy way and keep a good relationship with them....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, for instance, i feel, in summary, such as, talking about, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 313.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37060702875 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47592909168 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55910543131 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0287911342 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.0 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4736842105 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78947368421 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272793200196 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748500907589 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0915702842774 0.0737576698707 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19396327812 0.150856017488 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619053706827 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 11.7677419355 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.77 10.9000537634 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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