Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
In today's progressive and sophisticated world where we live in, it is apparent that people need to become involved in numerous problems and issuses of their hectic lifes and they should overcome those obstacles.while some individuals hold the opinion that thay do very few things well owing to the fact that they are busy, I; believe that it is possible to get things done successfully, and the reasons to substantiate my view point are elaborated upon hereunder.
The first reason which comes to my mind is that with the spread of information and advent of internet, individuals can easily learn how to do works effectively. As a matter of fact, thay can get the information about alot of things and assess how thay perform it shortly and precisely by just watching the program that they want to do in internet at their house. as an illustration, I used to go to my english class every odd day and that programm took a lot of my precious time since I had to go by my car and it lasted 5 hours. but when I became familiar with internet-based english course, I started to use it and result was perfect because it lasted 2 hours and I had time not only to practice with my piano but also to exercise at "stars" club. had I not use internet-based courses,I would not have had an opportunity to play piano and to exercise.
moreover, everyone in order to survive in these days needs to have a schedule which prioritizes activities and assigns how long he or she will work. although people might be very busy, a schedule will assist them so as to do their work completely and to do not feel overwhelming. my example drives this notion home. since last year I started to organize and prioritize my programs and activities. the result of do that course of action was great because never before had I had time to do all my works that I had to do.
In conclusion, taking all the aforemention reasons and points into accounts, I strongly believe that with using internet and technology and having a schedule, people can do divers tasks.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 76
- The widespread use of the internet has given people access to information on a level never experienced before. How does this increase in the availability of information influence life in today's world 76
- some parents offer 70
- If you could change one important thing about your hometown, what would you change? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer. 70
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, well, while, as to, in conclusion, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1706.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 364.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68681318681 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84014916668 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552197802198 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.99147079 48.9658058833 210% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 142.166666667 100.406767564 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.3333333333 20.6045352989 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.5376344086 325% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116919181511 0.236089414692 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456682243893 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03896813957 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0794918902713 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025977517667 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 11.7677419355 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 10.002688172 290% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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