Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
sports and social activities are some of the most influential parts of every man in society. At universities and colleges, social work and sports are the learning points for every student. While some peoples believe that the university should not take extra payment for sports and social activities, others strongly disagree. I believe that the universities must be avoided to make the payment like tuition fee.
First, universities should encourage their students to involve social activities because it is a blissful thing for society even countries. If they want financial support for these, they will lose their eagerness to work for their motherland. For example, my younger brother has resigned from his football team in college. Because that college has demanded a charge for a football match and they will not provide all the cost for arranging a football match. In this situation, not only my younger brother but also another boy will leave from here due to their financial crisis. Personally, I think college or universities authority more concern about them because they will be asset in-country one day.
Second, universities or colleges are the highest educational institution for any country. Most of the person believe and depend on the university by sending their son and daughter. Parents think that the university will teach proper things and they will give appropriate direction. So it is the own responsibility to teach social activities or sports to the students. In this case, universities demand may be unsocial activities. Moreover, the government allocates more budget for the educational sector. I think that the authority of universities should more conscious to spend their budget. They can provide for sports or social work from the big budget.
To sum up, I believe that universities and colleges should not receive equal payment like classes or libraries. It will discourage the students and will be a burden for their parents to carry the payment. Universities' authority and the government should more research on their activities so that they can develop their social activities by using their students.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, second, so, while, for example, i think, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1814.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 341.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31964809384 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80201557251 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486803519062 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 556.2 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.0263353354 48.9658058833 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.380952381 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2380952381 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156528602302 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574850633046 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484504059116 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114883435872 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355610025337 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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