Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
At universities and colleges, sports and social skills are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
Since the beginning of this century, in the distinctive civilized societies, it has been a very controversial topic that sports and social activities should be consider for financial aid because they are important too. Some people are inclined toward the topic that sports and social activities shouldn't be considered as a college activity, while others consider this topic in a whole diverse perspective. Although an absolute conclusion cannot be made, in spite of all opposite opinions, I strongly concur with the idea that sports and social activities are as important as courses and libraries. The outstanding reasons will be mentioned below.
First, sports help students be healthy in both physically and mentally manner and it will affect their efficiency in the college, that is, by getting exercises one can avoid all the tensions during the semester. For example, since last semester I has dedicated one hour of my daily life to exercise and it helps me to clear my mind off the college issues especially during the exam weeks.
Additionally, sports and social activities help students bond with each other. Basically sports and social activities occur within a team, therefore it's an extra opportunity for students to make friends and meet new people. For example, I met this girl, called, Sarah, in the University’s gym and we keep practice with each other and we are best friends now.
Furthermore, social activities make individuals multi-dimensional, that is if one just kept studying in the university one would be a one-dimensional person who could not be as effective as the other individuals because life is a multi-dimensional issue. From my experience, for example, I have this friend, Emma, who always gets great grades but she doesn't contribute any time to other people, I mean if all the individuals of a society became so selfish it could lead to a catastrophic situation for society.
Finally, only studying and attending to the classes without no fun is going to be boring and in some cases may lead to depression between students. A study conducted between 500 students from different universities in Iran revealed that approximately 60% of the students are suffering from depression and the most surprising result was that the students of Sharif University, which is an exclusive engineering school and the most prestigious university in Iran, consist 82% of them.
To sum up, I fundamentally agree with the idea that universities and colleges have to consider sports and social activities just as important as education and contribute financial aid for them. In preceding body paragraphs, I explored all of the significant reasons for my opinion.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'therefore', 'while', 'for example', 'i mean', 'in some cases', 'in spite of', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.234309623431 0.229887763892 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.144351464435 0.158761421928 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0941422594142 0.0866891130778 109% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0502092050209 0.046263068375 109% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0502092050209 0.0685040099705 73% => OK
Prepositions: 0.123430962343 0.118717715034 104% => OK
Participles: 0.0292887029289 0.0351676179071 83% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.05228087882 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0209205020921 0.0309702414327 68% => OK
Particles: 0.00209205020921 0.00188951952338 111% => OK
Determiners: 0.0962343096234 0.0887237588012 108% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0188284518828 0.0209618222197 90% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0167364016736 0.0139019557991 120% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2689.0 2387.08602151 113% => OK
No of words: 433.0 408.028673835 106% => OK
Chars per words: 6.21016166282 5.86048508987 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.48200974243 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.387990762125 0.338922669872 114% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.293302540416 0.251872472559 116% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.240184757506 0.174417080927 138% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.163972286374 0.112833075102 145% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05228087882 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538106235566 0.524397521467 103% => OK
Word variations: 62.4567539065 59.2087087015 105% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6684587814 73% => OK
Sentence length: 28.8666666667 20.5533526081 140% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.0589265039 48.84282405 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 179.266666667 120.699889404 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8666666667 20.5533526081 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.933333333333 0.644075263715 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.5376344086 132% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.54480286738 90% => OK
Readability: 58.1969207082 45.7405998639 127% => OK
Elegance: 1.5811965812 1.45489161554 109% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354386889016 0.300154397459 118% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.120416411635 0.103427244359 116% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0652791761476 0.0752933317313 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.641107042408 0.497263757937 129% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.133871355165 0.151897553556 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159525945302 0.114077575197 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11162195788 0.0781384742642 143% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.210602047375 0.336927656856 63% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.061042152339 0.067059652881 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226221085717 0.210909579961 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103131203683 0.0618886996521 167% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8870967742 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.86379928315 155% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.4623655914 244% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21 Out of 30
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