the ability to plan and organize our life in this complex world is prior to every work. plan is significantly important for managing our life. i believe plan is the best way to success in our complex world for some reasons which i will explore in the following topics.
firstly, every creature in this world have a plan. everyone's plan is different. for example, i want to study well, so i can apply to a good university then i will get a good job. if we see an addicted person he/she also has a plan her/his plan is to find money, so they can buy narcotic or an animals that they do not have wisdom also have plan, their plan is to find a shelter and food. successful people take their day plan during the night. without plan a person will not be successful in life. the person will be like a crazy in this world. we should plan how to study, how to spend our money and etc.
my brother is in college, he have a timetable for his studies, also he has it for his budget during a month.
secondly, after we get a plan, we should work hard on it. getting a plan is the first step for success and the second step is how we achieve our plans. we should not give up in life. after each struggle there will be a success. after each fall, we must get up stronger than before, and this is the way to success. for instance, when i was preparing for my college there was a lot of work that i had to do it in less time, but i never give up.
in conclusion, in this complex world having a good plan is very important. if we want a great future, we should take a great plan.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1258.0 1977.66487455 64% => OK
No of words: 308.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.08441558442 4.8611393121 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21926925199 2.67179642975 83% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474025974026 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 394.2 618.680645161 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.2570902997 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.9 100.406767564 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.5376344086 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180563338664 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651238232975 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463838569894 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113054023255 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471104979249 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.5 11.7677419355 47% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 58.1214874552 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.1575268817 55% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.09 10.9000537634 56% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.43 8.01818996416 80% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 86.8835125448 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.247311828 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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