No one can deny that there are both positive and negative aspects of today’s life. In my opinion, I completely agree with the idea that people now are less pleased with their lives than people were in the past. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will endeavor to expound upon in the following essay.
The first reason coming to mind to elucidate my standpoint is concerned with this issue that people could not make a time to spend with their acquaintances. This is because nowadays people concentrate on only improving their lifestyles and making comfortable future of them and their children. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my uncle’s experiences. About two years ago, he started working as a marketing manager on the big company, so he would stay on the company about twelve hours a day to complete the tasks. My uncle could not spend time with his friends and family, thus he felt stressed and self-reserved when communicating with other people. Additionally, his children behaved my uncle as a stranger because they saw him rarely at the house. As a result, if my uncle’s work graphic was not so dense and strict, he would not face these types of problems.
The second rationale behind this opinion is rooted in the fact that competition makes people less satisfied with their own lives. This is obvious that most of the people compares them to their relatives, friends, peers, and other people and try to seem the best person in all things. For example, a recent study conducted at Stanford University surveyed around six thousand people revealed that they usually watch other people’s successes and think that they can do better. When they have not got a talent on one work in which their relatives are in high level, they would be jealous about them and want their failures. Moreover, there are many people who have nervous diseases because of their enviousness. Therefore, if people do not compare their lives with those of others, they would not be nervous about other people’s accomplishments.
In conclusion, contemplating all the aforementioned reasons, I firmly conclude that nowadays people are less happy with their lives. This because people could not make a relationship with others in society and there is a competition between them to be more successful person.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 28, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'mind elucidating'.
Suggestion: mind elucidating
...wing essay. The first reason coming to mind to elucidate my standpoint is concerned with this is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, thus, for example, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1975.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 398.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96231155779 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76630427328 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535175879397 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.9755833814 48.9658058833 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 109.722222222 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1111111111 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30444107179 0.236089414692 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107991777809 0.076458572812 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106906430504 0.0737576698707 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2134877202 0.150856017488 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558976543461 0.0645574589148 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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