do you agree or disagree with the following statement?childhood is the happiest time of a person life.
One of the most significant and memorable parts of one's life is their childhood. Indeed, I believe childhood is the happiest time in a person's life. When we look back at our childhood days we feel so overwhelming, everyone used to love us, no responsibility and lot more advantages which I will explore in the following essay.
Firstly, the best part of childhood is a lesser responsibility, in fact, no responsibility at all. The one and only responsibility I had was to study which I used to think as a hard one, but compared to now I prefer going back to the school. Moreover, everyone in the family cares and loves you a lot. For instance, me and my sister went to the park and I influenced her to jump from the slide we both did and we were caught, but I did not get any scolding on top of that they were more concerned to check if I was injured, but my sister over there was getting scolding, just the fact that she was elder and she had more responsibility.
Secondly, this is my favorite part of childhood playtime. We have lots of time to play in fact no one used to assign any work for us. Especially, no worries about going to work, earn money, pay the bill, etc. Our daily routine was to play, eat, sleep repeat. I remember my schedule l, I used to wake up, the whole day I watch tv or go out and go back sleep. In addition, they would love to spend time with you, always there will be someone to take care of us.
Finally, During our childhood we were not judged by the society there was no pressure on how to behave. There were no worries on how to survive in this world, everything was so easy to get and just enjoy the moment.
In conclusion, I believe childhood is the best part of my life, I enjoy saying my childhood stories to others, it was a great time and best feeling like your ruling the world everybody loves you and ready to do anything for you.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Message: Use past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 357.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.28571428571 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56688417761 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535014005602 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.4104781351 48.9658058833 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.625 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3125 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.45110844103 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177842408906 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069666147394 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.097632648972 0.0737576698707 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112753313055 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0847284445332 0.0645574589148 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.9 10.9000537634 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 86.8835125448 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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