That children should be raised in a home with two parents is an undeniable fact. Every child deserves the advantage of having both parents present, especially at the early stages of childhood. I concede that the concept of modern family-single mom, single dad, two moms or two dads- has found its place in the homes of many young children; But, having two parents, a mother and a father is still a privilege that not everyone possesses. In what follows, I will discuss my justifications for holding this notion.
Firstly, we have to keep in mind that traditionally, mothers and fathers have different roles in fostering their child. Mothers are children’s first and most prominent teachers and Fathers are their heroes and first friends. Their roles cannot be taken by one another; For supporting example, one need look no further than one of the conventional school dances in which exclusively, girls are to dance with their dads. For a schoolgirl, Dancing with her single mom, wouldn’t be as nearly exciting as dancing with a dad she doesn’t have, and she would feel ashamed.
Moreover, a child is better taken care of and attended to if both parents are present. A single parent is required to work in order to provide for the family, hence they wouldn’t have much time to spend with their child. In the case of two parents, one of them can go to work and the other can stay at home with the child. I had a friend whose mom was divorced; she was always alone at home and would always get scared. Her mom had to work long hours so she could pay rent and other expenses.
To add further credibility to the claim that children should be raised in homes with two parents, we can consider the division of labor that occurs when both parents are present and have their traditional roles. For example, if the dad makes dinner, the mom would shower the child. But in the case for a single parent, all the chores would be the responsibility of one person. Thus, the quality of the work, whether it is feeding the child, helping the child with school assignments or keeping a tidy, clean home for the child to grow in, would be reduced.
In Closing, I believe because of the distinctive roles of each parents, the increased amount of time that each parent can spend with the child and the division of labor for both child affairs and household chores, a child should be raised in a home with two parents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, look, moreover, so, still, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2004.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 428.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68224299065 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57440165675 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490654205607 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 596.7 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4342670415 48.9658058833 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.333333333 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7777777778 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258412187328 0.236089414692 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0903419233616 0.076458572812 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0869740016712 0.0737576698707 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178782300877 0.150856017488 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0647369524801 0.0645574589148 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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