Nowadays, it is commonly accepted that the preserve of privacy of famous people is not strong enough and it is caused a lot of problem for this persons. Contrary to this popular beliefs there are still those who argue that the main causes of the low level of privacy of famous people are related to themselves. Because they used this fake materials and information about themselves for increasing the attention of people. I, to a great extent, agree with this idea that famous entertainers and athletes deserve to have more privacy than they have now.
First and foremost, sometimes we hear or read some information or pictures about famous people in the social networks that usually most of this news are lie and unreality. Unfortunately, some people spread false information, For example, created and shared an image from a woman actor in a not suitable place to destruction her personality. But, this image is not really taken on this place and produced by some computer application for instance photoshopped. Also, it is observed that recording a video from an athlete during bawl and distributed. but in my opinion, the personal life of each people should be safe and remain just for themselves. All of us may be having some mistake time in our life that done some mistake works. therefore it is very important that regards to the personality of each other.
On another significant fact, that should be taken into the consideration is that transmitting information about the family of the famous people led to created annoyance for them but they should have allowed of having a free life. Because they do not choices to have familiarity with famous people and sometimes transmitting fake news about this people led to collabs of their family.
Finally, yet importantly, this weakness in privacy led to decrease of quality of life. For example, imagine that when you arrive at any place all of the people want to take the photo and spoke with you. in the first maybe it was fun but after sometimes is become really the hardship. certainly, losing freedom in the society can make some mental diseases for this people.
On the basis of reasons that mentioned above, I am convinced that safety of the privacy is necessary for each member of society and especially for famous people who are more consideration for others. To preserve them from mentally and social damage from some delinquent and preventing from the extension of false news in the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 119, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of problems'.
Suggestion: a lot of problems
...e is not strong enough and it is caused a lot of problem for this persons. Contrary to this popu...
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Line 1, column 140, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...h and it is caused a lot of problem for this persons. Contrary to this popular belie...
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Line 2, column 274, Rule ID: FEMALE_ACTOR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'actress'?
Suggestion: actress
...ple, created and shared an image from a woman actor in a not suitable place to destruction ...
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Line 2, column 550, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...an athlete during bawl and distributed. but in my opinion, the personal life of eac...
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Line 2, column 733, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
... our life that done some mistake works. therefore it is very important that regards to th...
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Line 2, column 733, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: therefore,
... our life that done some mistake works. therefore it is very important that regards to th...
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Line 3, column 341, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... sometimes transmitting fake news about this people led to collabs of their family. ...
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Line 4, column 142, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...agine that when you arrive at any place all of the people want to take the photo and spoke...
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Line 4, column 203, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...t to take the photo and spoke with you. in the first maybe it was fun but after so...
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Line 4, column 243, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[10]
Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put between 'is' and 'become'.
Suggestion: is sometimes become
...in the first maybe it was fun but after sometimes is become really the hardship. certainly, losing ...
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Line 4, column 284, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Certainly
...ometimes is become really the hardship. certainly, losing freedom in the society can make...
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Line 4, column 359, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ciety can make some mental diseases for this people. On the basis of reasons that ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, really, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance, in my opinion, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2043.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 417.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89928057554 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65705919015 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501199040767 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 667.8 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4431182001 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.526315789 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9473684211 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57894736842 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191589820685 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636608918124 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111755217538 0.0737576698707 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115393905707 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.082832708245 0.0645574589148 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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