Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
For success in a future job, the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, the world is under rapid changes. Day by day, new technologies are created which raise up the importance of a high level of knowledge. As a result, unlike the past that everyone was able to perform every task, In these advanced days, each job need its own special requirements. In this regards, I vehemently assist that having a high level of knowledge, which is obtained by studying hard in school and university is much more important than having a relationship. Several reasons, three of which -that is- privatization, advancement in a job, as well as high attention to productivity, have a great consequences, are elaborated upon hereunder.
First and foremost, in the past, a significant portion of jobs are supervised by governments, in which a great source of budget exists. Therefore, such companies consume it without thinking about efficiency if their labors. As a result, they do not pay attention to the skill of their employees and hire employees with a good relationship. Nonetheless, by more privatization, companies understand that they must hire fully skilled labors. Therefore, the importance of studying hard is increased.
An equally important point in that without having a proper level of knowledge, even by having a strong relation, it is impossible to advance in the job. It is crystal clear that advancement is an unspliced part of every career. Even though a person hires by its relation, without enjoying a high level of skill and knowledge, it is impossible to advance and soon or later, he or she realizes that knowledge is much more necessary which indicates the importance of good efforts in schools.
Last but not least, by the globalization of industries and services, great attention is paid to raising up the productivity of companies. Therefore, companies only hire suitable employees. One example of this point is Iran Khodro, a car manufacturing in Iran, which rejected the hiring of president son and said to the president that we cannot reduce our productivity by hiring him.
To sum up, according to the aforementioned highly important statements and so many other reasons, the relationship is no more important in hiring. Therefore, let study hard and acquire a high level of skills to make our country and world into a prosperous and flourished ones.
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?For success in a future job, the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?In today's world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answ
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, nonetheless, so, therefore, well, as a result, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1952.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 378.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16402116402 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11052616608 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531746031746 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6489356972 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.444444444 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12880000037 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0420361075824 0.076458572812 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452737786897 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0719101674198 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036614735591 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.