Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
For the successful development of a country, it is more important for a government to spend money on the education of very young children(five to ten years old) than to spend money on universities.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
From long time ago, breeding and developing of a country was a huge concern for governers. opinions on this issue are divided. Some people believes that if government spend more money on universities rather than education of very young children,it will help the country to prosper earlier. Others disagree with this point of view. In my view, for a more develope country, greater budget should be spend on children--five to ten years old. The reasons why I believe so are manifold, however, three of which, tha thave the greatest consequent are elaborated upon hereunder.
First and foremost, developing happens gradually not over night. Thus, for a develope country, the governments should have long time plannings. Also, proper education system which will teach young children, how to act and behave, how to make a wise choice. Moreover, The the governers should have programs that teach student who to think in a logical way. For example, I have a friend who grow up in the United States. She claims that, in the kindergarden she attended, there was a host of different devices that she could use; These devices gives her the idea which skill she is good at doing. Also, she tried every little concepts that a child can understand. Currently, she is the most motivated and determined student in our class owing to her chid-hood experience. Conversly, those pupil like me whom their government pay more attention to it's universties rather than educating young children; Still cast doubt on if their choice was for this perticular field of study was correct or not?
Secondly, children are more avid to learn, to make try out everything. The more the people grow up, the less they want to learn different aspects and the less they are motivieted to take steps for helping the country to evolve. College students are less likely to be the ones to be counted on when there is the matter of developing. While children still have the energy and courage to be the ones who make a better world. For instance, childern all have the idea that they can change the world, if government help them to achieve this concept by bieng the best in whatever they are doing, they will grow up with this set of belief; Hence, they are always motivated and trying more.
Ultimaletly, if governmnets spend alot of money on universties, it cannot change the way university student think. Due to the reason that when people grow up, they will have fixed opinion and can marely be changed.
To sum up, I am a great believer that a great amount of country budget should be used in education of children; Because children are the fruits of each society also, the reason that a country can prosper and flourish.
- tpo 21 76
- tpo 21-independent task 3
- TPO-44 - Independent Writing TaskSome people believe that when busy parents do not have a lot of time to spend with their children, the best use of that time is to have fun playing games or sports. Others believe that it is best to use that time doing thi 71
- TPO-21 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?For success in a future job, the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your ans 76
- TPO-41 - Integrated Writing TaskBurning coal in power plants produces a waste product called coal ash, a material that contains small amounts of potentially harmful chemicals Environmentalists in the United States are concerned about the damage such harmf 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 92, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Opinions
...untry was a huge concern for governers. opinions on this issue are divided. Some people ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 245, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...er than education of very young children,it will help the country to prosper earlie...
^^^
Line 1, column 398, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'spent'?
Suggestion: spent
...elope country, greater budget should be spend on children--five to ten years old. The...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 541, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...which, tha thave the greatest consequent are elaborated upon hereunder. First an...
^^
Line 2, column 267, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: The
...e, how to make a wise choice. Moreover, The the governers should have programs that tea...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 267, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'The' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: The; The
...e, how to make a wise choice. Moreover, The the governers should have programs that tea...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 338, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a logical way" with adverb for "logical"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...rograms that teach student who to think in a logical way. For example, I have a friend who grow ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 781, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this pupil' or 'those pupils'?
Suggestion: this pupil; those pupils
...to her chid-hood experience. Conversly, those pupil like me whom their government pay more ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, thus, while, as for, for example, for instance, in my view, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2226.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 463.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80777537797 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63868890866 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53642074719 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537796976242 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 682.2 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.4825032967 48.9658058833 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7826086957 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1304347826 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13043478261 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248806458046 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693323546076 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.084991029243 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135193147343 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108252477949 0.0645574589148 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.