There are myriad factor or considerations which take into that in young age children should take responsibility to manage their own money as this will help them in future become financially responsible. As far as I am concerned according to the following reason and from my personal experiences, I am of the conviction that pupils should need to manage their money on their own at the young age. Someone can concisely weight pros and cons of each side. The reason will be explored in the following essay.
The first exquisite reason which gives adherences to my viewpoint with experience. If children manage their money at their young age this will help them in many ways as first in their young age children may not have as many money as they have in their prime but managing money by their own cannot come from one day this process comes with experiences as children manages their money in the young they have a lots of experiences how to manage money on their own. My experience is the best example on this, in my young age my parents never give me chances to manage my money they always manage this by their own when i go to college which is out of my town my parents start giving me money an expecting i will save money i have very hard time to saving money and it took me long time to manage my money.
Apart from the fact mention above one should regard consider another subtle point meticulously pertaining to obtaining with huge experiences. The noteworthy refreshing intelligible statistic revealed by a recent social research conducted in my country in which majority of people agrees that if pupils start to manage their money in their young age this will significantly increase the chances of success in financial responsibility. To shed more light on this topic according to the research done in Delhi University that children feel more confident when they start saving their money in young age as this will gives them the option to stand their feet and do not have to depend to their parents for financially desigen on their own.
Admittedly, someone can justify another side as they can say that children which try to manage money on their own if they dont success they become prodigal and it become hibeet to spend money and they never become successful in their adults age for money management but I still affirmed to the by giving children chance to manage money on their own is more beneficial.
In summary, from the facts aforementioned above I am of the concussion that if children try to make manage money on their own it will be more helpful for financial responsibility in the future for they become adult.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 219, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...heir young age children may not have as many money as they have in their prime but m...
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Line 2, column 219, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[2]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun money seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much money', 'a good deal of money'.
Suggestion: much money; a good deal of money
...heir young age children may not have as many money as they have in their prime but managin...
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Line 2, column 406, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
...ages their money in the young they have a lots of experiences how to manage money on t...
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Line 2, column 615, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ey always manage this by their own when i go to college which is out of my town m...
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Line 2, column 701, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ents start giving me money an expecting i will save money i have very hard time t...
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Line 3, column 613, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'give'
Suggestion: give
...g their money in young age as this will gives them the option to stand their feet and...
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Line 4, column 123, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ry to manage money on their own if they dont success they become prodigal and it bec...
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Line 4, column 164, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
...ont success they become prodigal and it become hibeet to spend money and they never be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, still, apart from, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 70.0 43.0788530466 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2175.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 463.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69762419006 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63868890866 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58814538187 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.41252699784 0.524837075471 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 699.3 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.1344086022 189% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 113.452633288 48.9658058833 232% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 181.25 100.406767564 181% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.5833333333 20.6045352989 187% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.398867717936 0.236089414692 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165019611215 0.076458572812 216% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107234842941 0.0737576698707 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.261955982318 0.150856017488 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474646012947 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.0 11.7677419355 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.37 58.1214874552 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 10.1575268817 166% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.0537634409 171% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.247311828 166% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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