By and large, people's mind have been always preoccupid with questions regarding how to build a better future. Vocations one may get have been always conisdered as a paramount element in paving the way for a prosper future. There are a plethora of people who are in the conviction that nowadays its much more easier to find a career that would provide them with a secure and prosper future , while others take a radically diferrent point of view and assert tht finding a job that would lead to a successful future was easier in the past. To the extent that my personal perspective is concerned, I accord with the first group. Among countless reasons which give adherence to my point of view, I will delve into the most conspicuous ones in the subsequent paragraphs.
Firstly, in the modern society that we live, the avenues of comminucation have been broden substantially, comparing to the past and thereby Exploiting others experience in order to find the best career have become much more convinient. The prevalence of Internet over the new era as a way of comminucation has helped many through giving them access to successful entreopenurships from all around the worls. For example, I was ebale to find the career that turned arounf my lifestyle through watching Gary Wines videos. Gary is a welll known socia media expert and has helped many, to find their way through the vecesicitates of life. Not only does he provide people, from all around the world, with general business advices , but he also gives them tailored adives regarding how to find the career that can bring about successfulness into their lives.
Secondly, people are more literate nowadays than they were in the past. As a result they are better equipped since knowledge can affect peoples sense of judgment in a positive course and enables them to recognize the consequences of their career choices more vividly. As an example of what people in the past would base their decession on, take my 80 year old uncle. With minimum literacy knowledge, he had spent most of his life in the ranch that had inhereted from his father. He persistently wanted to convince his son into persuading the family business which was farming. Believing that one can achive great fortune through farming, he was determined to force his son into being a farmer. "this is the only way to a better fututre" he would always say, Little he knww, his son followed the path of his brother and became a very successful doctor.
In short, all the aforementioned reasons and explanaitions leads to the conclusion that people can find the carrer that leads them to a better future more easily than people of the past.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Teacher were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
- Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 73
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?In the past it was easier to identify what type of career or job would lead to a secure, successful future.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 73
- TPO- 54 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Governments should spend more money in support of the arts than in support of athletics such as state-sponsored Olympic teams. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 90
- It is better to take a secure job with a low pay than to take a job with a high pay but is easy to lose 3
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, in short, as a result, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2216.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 456.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85964912281 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62105577807 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68723278444 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519736842105 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 697.5 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.7958788808 48.9658058833 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.111111111 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 5.45110844103 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164222119742 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0490040824726 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431075577739 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103066349096 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371265135931 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 86.8835125448 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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