Over the last few decades, many things in the world have changed which have greatly impacted our lives such that our current lifestyle differs from the lifestyle of our parents in many aspects. One of the paramount aspects is independence which many people believe that today's young people are not much dependent on their parents like the past and they make important decisions by themselves. I strongly agree with this statement regarding children become more independent than before due to three compelling reasons which I will explain in the following essay.
First and foremost, in recent years, educational systems have changed a lot and try to prepare children for real life, one of the utmost topics which student learn about in the school is independence, children taught how to make a decision and consider the positive and negative aspects of their decisions and they learned to accept all the consequences of their decisions, The children also taught by the school about how to work and earn some money furthermore how to manage their money in the young age in order to prevent from being embroiled into financial crises due to the difficulty which they will inevitably experience in the future.
Another interesting point which deserves some word is that self-confidence is another prominent reasons which make people feel positive about themselves and take risks on their lives by making their own decisions.
Another significant point which should take into consideration is that in past people preferred to live in a joint family where all member of the family such as parents, children, and grandparents lived with harmony and peace under the one roof, one the other hand these days the culture of living nuclear family is much more common. This culture has some deleterious effects on children’s behavior such as their decision so that in time of making a prompt decision none of the members of the family exist around the child so he/she has to make the decision by himself/herself. For example, when I graduated from the high school I hesitated between civil engineer and architecture, therefore, I ended up with a civil engineer so after a while I really hate that major because I didn’t consult with my family because they weren’t beside me. If I had asked my family to help me with this decision, I would never have undergone many hardships in my life.
Due to the aforementioned discussion explored in the previous statements, although parents are the main role model of the children and children are more influenced by their parents but they are more likely to make their decision by themselves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, really, regarding, so, therefore, while, as to, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2204.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 437.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04347826087 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76328273143 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510297482838 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 696.6 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 20.1344086022 214% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 139.188684885 48.9658058833 284% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 220.4 100.406767564 220% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 43.7 20.6045352989 212% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.3 5.45110844103 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295158459782 0.236089414692 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125589286673 0.076458572812 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102826222481 0.0737576698707 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173246664581 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379287606155 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.2 11.7677419355 206% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 58.1214874552 48% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 10.1575268817 198% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.84 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.0537634409 191% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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