Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In today's world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Today's world has been completely different from past due to many reasons. Advent of thechnology is one of abdamon reasons which has change our today's behaviour. In such a situation, I agree that performing activities quicly and accepting risks is more important than doing works gradualy and make sure that everything is correct. Among many reasons for this sgreement, I elaborate some important issues as follows.
First of all, dealing with computer has facilated access to many informations, and it is accessibal for every one in all over the world. For example, if you want to take a ticket for Olympic champion, all peaople can take it. However, it is important to take a ticcket quicly to be attentent in the race. On the other hand, if you do it slowly, you will miss a ticket for an important champion.
Secondly, if you accomplish a work quicly, the percent of making mistakes is not high. Scientific statistics illustrate in today's world which we dealing with modern technology, the number of mistakes are high, but the quality is low. For instance, as I am writting this essay quickly, I may have many mistakes in dictation, however the quality of the essay can be remain well.
On the other side, if you work slowly, you may miss many situations in your life. You can not find your mistakes alone. You may better to do works quick and leave your mistakes for other people to find.
In conclusion, I agree that doing works promptly and accepting risks is better than performing activities slowly and check every thing you do. Computers, low number of mistakes, and not to miss situations are reasons that can confirm my point of view.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 285.0 407.700716846 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84561403509 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61559120055 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529824561404 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.8800734208 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3125 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8125 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1875 5.45110844103 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333580828158 0.236089414692 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109678923136 0.076458572812 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0925468433856 0.0737576698707 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182019638611 0.150856017488 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0676095748836 0.0645574589148 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.