As human are born, they could do nothing by individual. They start crying when they want food. They would be trained by their family how to walk, speak, run etc. Their environment influences all the babies; for example, they will start walking even they are very tiny, so even after failure they try again. If the children do not accept the risk of fallen down, he could not escalates his body and walk as soon. Many people adhere to work slowly but accurate, while others believe to accept the risks and work quickly to get more benefits. Ego, when I come to my stance, by weighing the pros and cons, I firmly hold that working quickly and accept the risk could lead us to make a brilliant future. In what follows, I will cogently pinpoint my most conspicuous reasons to justify my point of view.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that if we do not make a decision quickly, many chances would be evolved. Some golden scenario would occur once and by losing the time for making a right resolution lead us to a dire concequence.For example, imagine a company, which has two viable options to tackle a problem within six months. If the leader waits until the last days, spending a substantial amount of time on recognizing the best solution, they lose the chance to try other solutions when the first one fails because of some internal or external problems. On the other hand, when the leader is fast, the company is less likely not to solve the problem
Another equally significant to be mentioned is that even we make a mistake by this way, this mistakes make us valuable experiences, which make us stronger. For instance; when I started my own business, the ministry of agriculture of Herat province announced a project, even this project was not my major I risked to gain that. Unfortunately, I field because I have no experience of doing such project, but it taught me very important lessons. Now I easily could lead those kinds of project for minor time.
In brief, contemplating all the aforementioned reasons, to be a success person in our life, we should accept the risks and do quickly. Thus, we could afford more money in less time. Otherwise, problems and mistakes would be the best teacher for us.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 376, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'escalate'
Suggestion: escalate
...t the risk of fallen down, he could not escalates his body and walk as soon. Many people ...
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Line 2, column 240, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...esolution lead us to a dire concequence.For example, imagine a company, which has t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in brief, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1831.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 393.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65903307888 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54432823633 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572519083969 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.4275629613 48.9658058833 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.722222222 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143710081334 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0442078156142 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583005633893 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0838458411354 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329120170323 0.0645574589148 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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