Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In today's world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
We spend many hours of our days doing different works; studying for our lessens, doing our tasks at our job, doing mundane tasks such as cooking and cleaning the house, etc. Some people believe that in today's world it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes, which is a controversial notion. However, I disagree with this point of view, for considerable reasons I'm going to explore here.
It is a widely held axiom that the industrialization and the technological advancements have been immense in recent centuries. Many inventions have taken place that have made human life much easier. Today, machines do many tasks that needed hard work by human before. Consider the drudgery of washing clothes for instance, which washing machines do in the fastest way possible today. As it is obvious, human is less working on mundane and ordinary tasks. Instead, they are spending much of their working time on more complex tasks that need careful thinking and paying attention. Even the workers of a factory are mostly put on the jobs that are more intricate and involved, which robots cannot do. It is not possible to do such works quickly, or you are bound to make costly blunders in them.
Alongside the reason discussed above, there is a well known Persian adage that says "do a job once but right". It has happened to all of us that we do something in a hasty way and then find out that we have made a big mistake, which means we have to do it again. I remember when I was working on my thesis, I had been behind from schedule. I wanted to do the related experiments as fast as possible, and so I made some hasty decisions. Later I found out that because of a mistake I had made, all the results were wrong and useless. I had to do all the experiments again, which cost me a lot of money and of course time.
According to the aforementioned reasons, although many people may think the other way, in my opinion it is more important to do things correctly, even to the cost of quickness. Not only has modern tasks become more delicate and attention-needing, but also it is always better to do the things once but correct. It is recommended that we put some more time on what we are doing so that we don't make any mistakes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...point of view, for considerable reasons Im going to explore here. It is a widely...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a hasty way" with adverb for "hasty"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...pened to all of us that we do something in a hasty way and then find out that we have made a b...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...re time on what we are doing so that we dont make any mistakes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, then, well, for instance, of course, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1848.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 404.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57425742574 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64290026702 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542079207921 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.1661274463 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224007649774 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691355744684 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641863394659 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137491434396 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042356482032 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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