I completely agree with the statement that there will be fewer cars in use than today. And this trend of decreasing usage in cars is beneficial for the environment and our offspring.
These days we pay more and more attention on the environmental protection. The carbon dioxide released by the using of cars is a major cause to the increasing of global climate which would lead to lifting up of sea level. And the using of the car would increase the concentration of particles in the atmosphere which is also harmful for our health. Take these into consideration, the trend of decreasing usage of cars is developed gradually.
Actually, cars as transport tools are not effective in our daily life. If you remember what happened on your way to work by cars every morning, so many cars are stuck on the road due to the traffic jam. It is obviously a waste of time. And when you go out for shopping or dating with your friend in a restaurant, it is very difficult for you to find a parking place. I have read a news that a mother gets up early every day to take a parking space in advance for her son, very irony. So sometimes this kind of transport could bother you too much.
The last but not the least, if you have noticed these days, different kinds of transports are already existed to be substituted tool/replace ment for cars. There are new-designed beneficial for the environment tools such as power motors or bicycles, convenient with small size for using. And also the public vehicles like subways or public buses could be the replacement.
I am convinced that there would be fewer cars in the future than today, and I wish it could come true to make our life better.
- Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time. Which of these situations do you think is better? 60
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 66
- The expression “Never, never give up” means to keep trying and never stop working for your goals. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
- TOEFL T P O 49 - Integrated Writing Task 3
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The extended family (grandparents, cousins, aunts, and uncles) is less important now than it was in the past.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 269, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...f time. And when you go out for shopping ,or dating with your friend in a restaura...
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Line 5, column 381, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'news'.
Suggestion: news
...ou to find a parking place. I have read a news that a mother gets up early every day t...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 180, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'positives'?
Suggestion: positives
...e ment for cars. There are new-designed positive for the environment tools such as power...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, so, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 302.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58940397351 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62768739011 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569536423841 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1427277165 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1333333333 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.45110844103 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217269497357 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079289313592 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114714156748 0.0737576698707 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141802731568 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0952363631696 0.0645574589148 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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