Some people think carrying on your parents’ jobs is good. I however, disagree, and think that you should have a complete choice over what job you pick. Having a different career from your parents would allow you to have more experience in life. It could also allow you to have a bigger chance in a better life.
Firstly, I think that having a different job from your parents is good, because it would give you more experience. The reason of this is because, it is very likely your parents would tell you about their jobs. As a result, you would know more about things. One example is when my dad told me about his job. I learned more about it, and I told my friends things that related to my dad’s job.My point is you already know what kind of job they have, thus, it is better if you have knowledge of other work.
Secondly, you could have a better chance at making more money. One example is my uncle. He heard from his father about his job, and tried something else. He now makes more money than what my grandpa used to make. Knowing what one job can do, and how much money it can give you is a good knowledge to know what to do and what not to.
Overall, I think that you should decide on a job different from your parents. It could benefit you a lot, and can give you a lot more wisdom and experience.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 135, Rule ID: REASON_IS_BECAUSE[1]
Message: Probably an incorrect phrase. Use 'the reason 'is that''.
Suggestion: is that
...you more experience. The reason of this is because, it is very likely your parents would t...
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Line 3, column 396, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: My
...hings that related to my dad's job.My point is you already know what kind of ...
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Line 5, column 278, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[4]
Message: The pronoun 'you' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'be'
Suggestion: be
... do, and how much money it can give you is a good knowledge to know what to do and...
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Line 5, column 281, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[4]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'good knowledge'.
Suggestion: good knowledge
..., and how much money it can give you is a good knowledge to know what to do and what not to. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, i think, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 52.1666666667 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1077.0 1977.66487455 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 251.0 407.700716846 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.29083665339 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15081886945 2.67179642975 81% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 212.727598566 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494023904382 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 334.8 618.680645161 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0622499992 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.3125 100.406767564 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6875 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327000162165 0.236089414692 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125505495531 0.076458572812 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664069058094 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220542995242 0.150856017488 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575458535103 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 11.7677419355 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 58.1214874552 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.1575268817 55% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.31 10.9000537634 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.08 8.01818996416 76% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 86.8835125448 31% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.247311828 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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