Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject.
Some says that it would be better to have broad knowledge than to specialize in a single one. but the truth is that people would have a better career if he or she perform excellent in a narrower field. And many evidences show that people with a broad but shallow knowledge tend to fail in the future.
In order to be successful and competitive, teachers always tell students that they need to find something they are really interested in and try to go deep in that area. For example, if a person find himself enjoy painting, more than any other things, he would be better to focus in art. After spending great amount of time cultivating, he might possibly be an excellent artist. what encouraged him was the passion that made him who he is.
Besides, it would be difficult for almost anyone to concentrate outside his or her comfort zone. which means that if someone choose any subject that he or she might not perform great or simply not interested in, then he or she might not even find a effective way of learning. Concequently, he or she would probably wasting time struggling in many subjects.
Additionally, many people would be surprised that there are many successful CEO that are not good at many baisc things, including English. Take Terry Kuo as an example, he is the CEO of one of the laeding manufacturer in cellphones and computers. What really interesting is that despite his successful in management he is not good at speaking, especially in front of people. There are many times that he struggled to speak a complete sentence to the reporters fluently. And it is obvious that the deficient in speaking does not stop him from leading a company, which stands on the top 100 lagest companies in the world.
Due to the reasons above, specialize in a specific subject would be better than to have a broad knowledge of many academic subjects. As many people say, choose what you love and take a step further.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 95, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...dge than to specialize in a single one. but the truth is that people would have a b...
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Line 1, column 164, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'performs'.
Suggestion: performs
...would have a better career if he or she perform excellent in a narrower field. And many...
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Line 5, column 340, Rule ID: MIGHT_PERHAPS[1]
Message: Use simply 'might', 'possibly'.
Suggestion: might; possibly
...ng great amount of time cultivating, he might possibly be an excellent artist. what encouraged...
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Line 5, column 340, Rule ID: MAY_COULD_POSSIBLY[1]
Message: Use simply 'might'.
Suggestion: might
...ng great amount of time cultivating, he might possibly be an excellent artist. what encouraged...
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Line 5, column 379, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: What
... might possibly be an excellent artist. what encouraged him was the passion that mad...
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Line 9, column 98, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
...ntrate outside his or her comfort zone. which means that if someone choose any subjec...
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Line 9, column 126, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'chooses'.
Suggestion: chooses
...mfort zone. which means that if someone choose any subject that he or she might not pe...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 248, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... in, then he or she might not even find a effective way of learning. Concequently...
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Line 9, column 316, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'waste'
Suggestion: waste
... Concequently, he or she would probably wasting time struggling in many subjects. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, really, so, then, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 340.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70588235294 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63057613382 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511764705882 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3524064127 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1176470588 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.76470588235 5.45110844103 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214937249691 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771753242326 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114832954037 0.0737576698707 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156166071784 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.142602051067 0.0645574589148 221% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.