Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
“news is important in all worlds" Bertrand Russell one of the brilliant mind through the history. Events for all situation about folklore and animals all subject is one of the hectic phenomena in every modern society. Affecting people in all walks of life considerably. The question is that however, whether agree or this agree has sparked a spirited debate among people recently. I am, to a huge extent agree in favor of the former standpoint. in the ensuring paragraph i will try to shed some lights on my perspective through some ample examples and conscious reasons.
on the one hand, it is crystal clear that if i know about event you may be helper to people so this situation have positive effect of you for example one city in my country had earthquake and it was very disappointment and I was very sad so I and some friends bought many foods and helper's thing for people and we went to this city and we tried to help them after this happening we were very happy if we did not see this event in the TV maybe some people have damage effect and these people remained hungry and thirsty.
on the other hand, there is no doubt that if i read news paper about scientific and other subject i can improve my knowledge for example in the today news i read about frags scientific found one reason for disease from slope's frogs and it is very helpful fro all the people's world while i read this information so i enjoyed because my friend has this disease and i will call to him and i say about this happen.
finally, nobody can deny that if i search news event happening around the word this knowledge may be have positive effect in my situation in works an d society. for instance my father have company about cloths, in the tv have program news about industries about modern cloths my father try to learn every thing about new cloths and modern cloths. these news helped my father every day and every year.can these news help my father?
to make long story short, from all the above mentioned reasons and points, one can safely draw a conclusion that if one weight merits and demerits of above statement, we can soon realize that it is important to know about events happening around the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, may, so, while, for example, for instance, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1820.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 398.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57286432161 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38040365433 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479899497487 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 570.6 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.1344086022 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 138.645431066 48.9658058833 283% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 151.666666667 100.406767564 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.1666666667 20.6045352989 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 5.45110844103 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.5376344086 397% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151356406641 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612911280152 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348375055715 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.095483911879 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349757856386 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 11.7677419355 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.9 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.82 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.0537634409 151% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.