Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Everyday many events happening around the world and wanted or unwanted we are involved in them. The importance of these events is more distinguishable when something bad happened, and without a shadow of a doubt, they certainly affect the life of the whole world's settlements. Although some believe that it is better to be indifferent about this news, some are inclined toward to follow the news because they firmly believe, their life will be influenced. From my perspective, it is necessary to be aware of them and pay heed. In the subsequent paragraphs, I will cogently elaborate on my points of view.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that they are all humans, it is no secret for anyone that our feelings change toward the happiness or sadness of other people, in other words, we are a family in the bigger measure. As a result, it is our duty to pay attention and show reactions about different news. For example, when people protest for stopping wars against particular countries, it limits the power of the politicians and people sympathize with other persons that are in danger.
Another equally noteworthy reason in corroborating this issue is that if we do not support or show disagreement, it would take effect on our life gradually. Apart from the sense of sympathy, its effects will be appeared in our society little by little. To exemplify, if the countries which are the producers of oil are banned or they could not find their oil of such problems, not only do those countries face problems but also the globally cost of the oil increase undoubtedly, inasmuch as we are all connected to each other such a complex system. Though some deny it and hold the opposite view to get the temporary profits.
Finally, it is indisputable fact that can learn from these events and do not repeat such mistakes that happened in some places, accordingly promote our country to develop greatly. For clarifying this reason, the flood destroys many houses in rural areas, we can fortify them and take some consideration to prevent them in our country or states before happening. As a matter of fact, we use that news for boosting ourselves.
In brief, all the aforementioned reasons lead us to the conclusions that by paying attention to this news we are able at least to save our investment and positively utilize them. Consequently, it is highly recommended that authorities be more cautious about them to help the country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: Every day
Everyday many events happening around the world ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, consequently, finally, first, if, so, apart from, at least, for example, in brief, as a matter of fact, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2032.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 416.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88461538462 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78192100143 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552884615385 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 639.9 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.4627100819 48.9658058833 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.529411765 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4705882353 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.11764705882 5.45110844103 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142255928544 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453709726949 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041480249322 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0745761487359 0.150856017488 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053741607757 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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