Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important for for the government to spend money on art museum and concert halls than on recreational facilities such as swimming pools and play grounds.
Nowadays, people and more importance entertainment active, the government began construct all kings of entertainment place, like art museum or swimming, but government funds have limited. So I disagree this idea,I think the government should use money to build the swimming pools and play grounds.
Firstly, construct swimming pools can make teenagers get good exercise and relax. Nowadays, teenagers have all kinds of pressure, they do not have enough time to get good exercise lead to can not keep health. So, it is good exercising ways by swimming. Swimming can improve they body physique and lose weight. For example, my friends who name is XD. He always exercise by swimming. So, he have can keep good figure and get good body physique.
In the another hands, the swimming pools and play grounds are easier to accept than art museum by public. And the art museum or concert halls are more expensive than swimming pools or play grounds. No matter with constructing of tickets. People will more like spend money in the swimming pools instead of to watch art museum. And art museum or concert hall just one time, do not have repeat watch significance, but swimming pools and played grounds can repeat to play.
Finally, the played grounds is a great place to promote family relationship. In the weekend, the parents can carry to them children go to played ground together play. Children can get good relax and parents build relationship with them. And teenagers can invite their friends to together to play, it is good improve friendship way. For example, my friends and I well select in at the end of the final exam together to played grounds, we are very happy and we get good relax.
All in all, I think the swimming pools and played grounds is better to art museum. The swimming well more accessible to the general public, and can make people get good exercise and relax.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 212, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
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Line 3, column 361, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'exercises'.
Suggestion: exercises
...e, my friends who name is XD. He always exercise by swimming. So, he have can keep good ...
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Line 3, column 390, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
... He always exercise by swimming. So, he have can keep good figure and get good body ...
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Line 9, column 125, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...he swimming well more accessible to the general public, and can make people get good exercise ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, so, well, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.0286738351 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 322.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8602484472 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47819860131 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 212.727598566 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.459627329193 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 452.7 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.2499833267 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.5238095238 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.04761904762 5.45110844103 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305234692977 0.236089414692 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102473817982 0.076458572812 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10597815408 0.0737576698707 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18625763471 0.150856017488 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123436413964 0.0645574589148 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.44 8.01818996416 80% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 86.8835125448 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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