Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more more important to keep your old friends than to make new friends.
Use specific examples and reasons to support your answers.
There may exist contention about which one is more important, whether to make new friends or to keep the old friends. In my opinion, making the new friends is more important than being connected only with small circle of old friends due to the following mentioned reasons.
Firstly, making new friends with different background such as education, cast, religion, society and nationalism helps to make the friend circle wider and to understand the motley of aspects as mentioned above. People with different background have their own history and this facet helps us to make us more mature by understanding the circumstances. For instance, making new friends from other parts of world, let’s take India, helps to know the ongoing trend on India, historical back ground of India and so forth. Moreover, nowadays the world is focused on networking by connecting with people which is beneficial in business as well.
Secondly, being confined in small group of old friends reduces the chances of getting help in the difficult situation. As we grow, we travel to different places and the old friends cannot be always be with us. For instance, if a person is limited with school friends only which are normally less in numbers, then these friends may not be available in the difficult situation. On the contrary, making new friends wherever we go make readily availability of friends and helps to confront with the situation.
However, making new friends randomly may sometimes harm oneself. For instance, if we get connected with the friends which are not in line of our thinking then the situation may distract us and make us to ramble away from our norms and goals. So, the step of making new friends should be taken with great care so that the mutual benefits and understanding exit.
In conclusion, I believe in making new friends and increase the size of friend zone so that this makes people to widen the knowledge about the situation and circumstances.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 328.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01219512195 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66721424454 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503048780488 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.982069566 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.428571429 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4285714286 5.45110844103 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278255059325 0.236089414692 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11971650862 0.076458572812 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694749305562 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18532715612 0.150856017488 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0850159643791 0.0645574589148 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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