Human are the most remarkable creation on the Earth, due to their high advanced brains. The argument is whether human can learn some skills that have not developed before, such as being a leader, or not. I believe that human is able to become a leader whenever they want because of following reasons.
To begin with, the most considerable factor for developing a new skill is learning. In fact, if human gradually learnt an activity, they would become an expert in that activity. For instance, Network Marketing recently is introduced to the world as a career, and it contains ordinary people as members. After a person joined in a Network Marketing's group, that person must be trained by previous members. In the Next step, that person must invite others to join in his career and produce a group of members. Finally, he would become a leader of his own group, and in order to succeed he must train them.
Furthermore, if we want to learn a new skill, we have to directly work on our minds. Consider a baby as an example, even though he could not even sit by himself, he would walk after a couple of years, since he gradually worked with his legs' muscles. Since, brains are part of our bodies, we could work and develop them by practicing. So, people would be able to guide a team while they have worked on their own brains.
Last but not the least, we must affect our personality to learning a new skill, and by building a strong self-confidence, we would overcome each aspect of vicissitudes of being a leader. The first source of our confidence is family, especially when we were children. Afterward, friends became the most effective source, which a person can utilize for rebuild his own confidence by choosing more confident friends. Due to that, a person would learn how to act as a leader. Hence, he would easily speak in front of audience, also he would bring about the best ideas regarding a wide variety of phenomenon.
To sum up, I am of the conviction that a leader did not need to be born. Indeed, he or she must be build up over time. Due to that, he must learn, practice and work on his personality.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, hence, if, regarding, so, while, for instance, in fact, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1742.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 381.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57217847769 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56385444032 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535433070866 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8378151249 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.9523809524 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0855806530165 0.236089414692 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0306143622287 0.076458572812 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.030895685593 0.0737576698707 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0574718448043 0.150856017488 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235629374747 0.0645574589148 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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