Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Most advertisements make products seem much better than they really are.
it goes without saying that in our modern world everything is changing drastically, specifically the market which is a very competitive, huge and unfortunately cruel place for both buyers and sellers or producers.in this giant place everyone is trying to attain his own benefits in order to survive and keep going. One of the most important methods to achieve more benefit is advertising. Some people are inclined toward the opinion that advertisements try to show a totally different and better product to costumers while others look at this matter through a different lens. I personally contend that the former opinion is closer to reality. The following reasons will aptly substantiate my viewpoint.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that nowadays productions are being done in high rates and investors put a huge amount of money in the market, consequently they expect a satisfying benefit from it. In order to gain that, they sign contracts with advertising companies and from that time it's their duty to sell all products. For this purpose they start to make the product attracting in costumer's eyes, so they have to at least hide the negative points of it, which is a part of the reality, and exaggerate the merits of the product or they cannot accomplish their missions.
Another reason which deserves some words here is that costumers mostly judge the products based on their appearance so advertisers try to abuse this feature for their own benefit by designing beautiful covers and showing handsome people using their products in their advertising clips and many other ways. To illustrate, once I wanted to change my shampoo and start using a new one, so I went to a shop and they had two appropriate shampoos for me and I chose the more beautiful one. What I'm trying to say is that we are encouraging the advertisers to introduce a more beautiful product to us by showing weakness in facing beauty and forgetting about the real function of the product.
Although the aforementioned reasons are the first ones which cross the mind at the first glance, they are by no means the only reasons available actually there is another subtle point which must be bared in mind. The noteworthy refreshingly intelligible statistics, revealed by a recent social research conducted in my country, shows that the products which have had a more expensive advertising on TV and on billboards all around the cities had been sold more than the others at least 20 percent. This shows the importance of advertising and the money they spend on it on order to oversell. As a result it is predictable that they sometimes conceal some points or even lie.
All in all, although advertising has its own benefits and it can keep us up to speed with the market but sometimes investors try to fool people by the aid of fake features, overselling and some special effects. It is anticipated that if the governments do not put some regulations on the advertisement business there is going to be dramatic consequences for costumers and they will become totally confused and the ultimate result will be costumer’s mistrust of producers.
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'but', 'consequently', 'first', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'while', 'at least', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.202127659574 0.229887763892 88% => OK
Verbs: 0.184397163121 0.158761421928 116% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0904255319149 0.0866891130778 104% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0443262411348 0.046263068375 96% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0673758865248 0.0685040099705 98% => OK
Prepositions: 0.120567375887 0.118717715034 102% => OK
Participles: 0.0496453900709 0.0351676179071 141% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.85833983386 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0390070921986 0.0309702414327 126% => OK
Particles: 0.00177304964539 0.00188951952338 94% => OK
Determiners: 0.113475177305 0.0887237588012 128% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0106382978723 0.0209618222197 51% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0124113475177 0.0139019557991 89% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3141.0 2387.08602151 132% => OK
No of words: 528.0 408.028673835 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.94886363636 5.86048508987 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79356345386 4.48200974243 107% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.333333333333 0.338922669872 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.257575757576 0.251872472559 102% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.19696969697 0.174417080927 113% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.138257575758 0.112833075102 123% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85833983386 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 275.0 212.727598566 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520833333333 0.524397521467 99% => OK
Word variations: 63.3312721687 59.2087087015 107% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6684587814 82% => OK
Sentence length: 31.0588235294 20.5533526081 151% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.7678039744 48.84282405 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 184.764705882 120.699889404 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0588235294 20.5533526081 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.588235294118 0.644075263715 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 56.816399287 45.7405998639 124% => OK
Elegance: 1.25748502994 1.45489161554 86% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16506556388 0.300154397459 55% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.106119621738 0.103427244359 103% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0550039409805 0.0752933317313 73% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.57342223411 0.497263757937 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.164520215702 0.151897553556 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746626216828 0.114077575197 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0312968643098 0.0781384742642 40% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.406753101093 0.336927656856 121% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0483354633108 0.067059652881 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114234160887 0.210909579961 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366351216591 0.0618886996521 59% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.4623655914 203% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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